I'm confused. I either make my card invisible, preventing it from taking damage, and slowly destroying my opponents max HP, or I make it visible, susceptible to CC, and slowly killing itself?Why would I ever make it visible?
"Lose 1 Hp" implies that you lose it. I would say "Loses 1 HP" or possibly even state the creature's name if there's space. Just thought I'd help you clarify it as that confused me. It's otherwise a great card.
There is only one word on my mind when I look at the card art: Mitsubishi. LOL
...wut? I just stuck three octahedrons together. If that causes copyright issues...