Necrokinesis|Necrokinesis

[AnonymousRevival]

NAME: Necrokinesis ELEMENT: Death COST: 9 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: None TEXT: Summons 3 4|4 undead warriors.	NAME: Necrokinesis ELEMENT: Death COST: 11 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: None TEXT: Summons 4 4|4 undead warriors.

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[bored_ninja777]

This one i like actually. idk about the cost though. divided up for unupped its 3 4/4 creatures for 3 quantum each.. upped its just under 3 per creature and u get a 4th. so maybe lower it to summons 2 / 3 or raise cost..

[AnonymousRevival]

Okay, but just so you know, I actually thought of these series as rare cards.

[bored_ninja777]

rares are fine to make but the cost per monster is still pretty strong.. what other 4/4 creatures come out for 3? u get a 4/2 with FFQ and the life rush decks cost 5 to play their 5/3 and 5/5s

[Gower]

It would be nice to see the monsters the card summons, for the art and/or abilities.
The mechanic of this card is very nice, but it need a nerf. To raise the cost of it sounds best to me.

[PhantomFox]

In general, when making a creature card, 1 attack is worth 1 cost, before adding in other factors.  Thus, this should be 12 and 16 respectively.  However, this is three/four cards for the deck-space of one card, so that along should justify its rarity status. 

[guolin]

Also, Rarity is NOT an excuse to make a card stronger in comparison to other cards, especially since they can be won from T50. Even the nymphs are balanced with annoyingly high costs, and they are epic rare.

 Moderator Comment Let's keep the text normal-sized, please.

[AnonymousRevival]

Okay, I will change it to 12 and 15, because of upgrade purposes, just for a little benefit.

[AnonymousRevival]

NAME: Necrokinesis ELEMENT: Death COST: 12 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: None TEXT: Generates 3 Undead warriors.	NAME: Necrokinesis ELEMENT: Death COST: 16 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: None TEXT: Generates 3 Undead Guardians.

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NAME: Undead Warrior ELEMENT: Death COST: 4 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4|4 TEXT: When its summoned, it stays frozen for one turn. It cannot be affected while its frozen.	NAME: Undead Guardian ELEMENT: Death COST: 5 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 6|6 TEXT: When its summoned, it stays frozen for one turn. It cannot be affected while its frozen.

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[bored_ninja777]

thats better. Only problem i see is that when a creature starts out frozen 1 turn you want it to be immortal as well but only for that turn. i suppose a counter for how long its immortal would work. maybe just drop the immortal part.. the only thing thats really doing is stopping shockwave from instant killing it.

[AnonymousRevival]

Like you said before in one of my series, each quanta equals to 1|1 monster, so four quanta equals to 4|4. However, because it is frozen, to make it fair, just make it immortal for one turn.

[PhantomFox]

It's actually a bit more complicated than that.  Check out the topic on "Creature Card Cost Mechanics" in the Design Theory subsection.  But I agree that the cost is better now.