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Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg484760#msg484760
« on: April 21, 2012, 08:45:29 am »
NAME:
Push
ELEMENT:
Gravity
COST:
4 :gravity
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Target creature gains status Fallen: Lose one attack every turn and cannot be targeted or target. Airbornes immune.
NAME:
Push
ELEMENT:
Gravity
COST:
3 :gravity
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Target creature gains status Fallen: Lose one attack every turn and cannot be targeted or target. Airbornes immune.
ART:
Annele, background is modified momentum
IDEA:
Annele
NOTES:
When I think of Gravity, I think of an infinite cravass that creatures fall into for the rest of time. As they fall, they get further away and deal less damage. Positive attacks gain -1/-0 until it reaches 0. Negative attacks gain +1/+0 until it reaches 0. They cannot be targeted, so far down in the crevass. They cannot target, but can grow. Fallen is a status like poison.
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« Last Edit: April 21, 2012, 08:35:35 pm by Annele »
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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485607#msg485607
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 10:39:53 pm »
Any comments?
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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485613#msg485613
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2012, 10:47:02 pm »
It cannot target? What does that mean? They can't devour or use their abilities on anyone else? Fallen would also be better if you worded it "attack gets closer to zero by one each turn"

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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485618#msg485618
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2012, 10:48:29 pm »
Seems to be too many effects shoved into one card...

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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485621#msg485621
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2012, 10:52:08 pm »
Get rid of the targeted part. And nice drawing :)
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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485634#msg485634
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2012, 11:02:00 pm »
Get rid of the targeted part,

Should it just lose its ability?

And nice drawing :)

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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485637#msg485637
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2012, 11:04:33 pm »
Get rid of the targeted part,

Should it just lose its ability?


Yeah. It would be much simpler.
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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485642#msg485642
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2012, 11:09:37 pm »
Get rid of the targeted part,

Should it just lose its ability?

And nice drawing :)

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You said the effect was like poison, so it does not lobotomize and creatures can still grow out of it. I rather like the idea of being untargettable along with losing attack. It makes it sort of a double edged sword.

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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485653#msg485653
« Reply #8 on: April 22, 2012, 11:25:32 pm »
You said the effect was like poison, so it does not lobotomize and creatures can still grow out of it. I rather like the idea of being untargettable along with losing attack. It makes it sort of a double edged sword.

Do you think it shouldn't lose its skill?
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Re: Push | Push https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=39005.msg485654#msg485654
« Reply #9 on: April 22, 2012, 11:26:31 pm »
You said the effect was like poison, so it does not lobotomize and creatures can still grow out of it. I rather like the idea of being untargettable along with losing attack. It makes it sort of a double edged sword.

Do you think it shouldn't lose its skill?
It's up to you. But if the effect is like poison, it doesn't lobotomize.

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« Reply #10 on: April 23, 2012, 08:57:04 am »
Hmm, I'd rather it wasn't just a  :gravity lobo. Any thoughts on the cost?
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