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Gust | Tempest https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg133347#msg133347
« on: August 08, 2010, 02:16:14 am »
NAME:
Gust
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
7 :air
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
Enemy creatures and active card effects have a 50% chance to miss/fail. Goes to enemy's side at start of turn.
NAME:
Tempest
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
5 :air
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
Enemy creatures and active card effects have a 50% chance to miss/fail. Goes to enemy's side at start of turn.
ART:
Julian Raßmann and Floriana Barbu
IDEA:
finkel
NOTES:
It switches sides during each player's draw, so along with the draw animation the card will switch sides. Active card effects means anytime you click on a card to use its ability, there is a 50% chance that the ability will fail, consuming the quanta with no result. For example, clicking on an electrum hourglass has a 50% chance to use up 1 :time but not draw a card.
SERIES:
Swarmtastic

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Re: Breeze | Gust https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg133350#msg133350
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2010, 02:21:49 am »
A) The name shouldn't be a permanent. Maybe "Pillar of Gust"?

B) The upped version should have an "upped border."

Besides that, I like the concept - a 1 cost decrease might help, though.

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Re: Breeze | Gust https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg133560#msg133560
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2010, 09:44:51 am »
...how does a 'Breeze' stop a Ruby Dragon from attacking properly? O_o That doesn't make much sense...

That said, you should fix the following when you can finkel:
-Add a ' :air' symbol after the card Cost section in your table
-Use different art that the one you have. It's copyrighted/only available through purchase from that site it seems

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Re: Breeze | Gust https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg133635#msg133635
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2010, 01:28:23 pm »
Fixed everything.

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Re: Breeze | Gust https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg133930#msg133930
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2010, 09:20:52 pm »
Fixed everything.
Uh... not quite. ^^;;;

-Provide a link to the artists in question to the art you used
-Fix the title to match the card names for both the non-upped and upgraded forms

...and if these were for the Trials, then you should also have a link to your Series thread as well that includes links to all your cards from that series, including this one.


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Re: Gust | Tempest https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=10848.msg134120#msg134120
« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2010, 03:09:18 am »
CURATOR COMMENT

To Be Crucible Ready
- Link to your source Images for the Art, and if those are the artist, they need to be credited on the Card Image
- You need to link to your Series Topic (Trial Requirement)

 

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