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Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181778#msg1181778
« on: March 10, 2015, 12:40:56 am »
NAME:
Tranverse Dragon
ELEMENT:
Entropy
COST:
15 :entropy
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
10 | 5
TEXT:
Fracture:
Successful damage sets your opponent current hp into maximum hp.
NAME:
Segment Dragon
ELEMENT:
Entropy
COST:
16 :entropy
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
12 | 6
TEXT:
Fracture:
Successful damage sets your opponent current hp into maximum hp.

ART:
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IDEA:

NOTES:
Theme:
The underworld apprentice summoned
the dragon from the netherworld

but the dragon do not obeys the apprentice
as its master and starts to destroy portal
used to summon the dragon.

Combos:
Standalone card.

Rules Set:
1. Fracture skill activates when Tranverse Dragon attacks
and not at the end your turn,
any creatures that attacks after Tranverse Dragon
does not decreases opponent max health.

(revised on 28/04/15)
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« Last Edit: April 29, 2015, 03:19:29 am by foxrain4 »

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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181783#msg1181783
« Reply #1 on: March 10, 2015, 01:12:09 am »
I feel like it's not OP, but I also feel like this is OP at the same time. Posting to keep track of this idea and see other people's opinions, although I believe that this concept of max HP reducing creature is pretty common.
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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181785#msg1181785
« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2015, 01:26:58 am »
I would say it is on the OP side, because if you have enough damage, you can easily remove 25 or more from max HP per turn. If you want this effect to stay, you should make the creature a lot weaker - in reach of most CC cards - and lower its ATK
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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181787#msg1181787
« Reply #3 on: March 10, 2015, 02:03:47 am »
Cards that reduce max HP are common.

This card is UP, simply due to its high cost.

Scale it down.

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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181791#msg1181791
« Reply #4 on: March 10, 2015, 02:30:05 am »
You're all right. It's UP because it's inefficient as a beatstick compared to Purple Dragon, but once it hits the board it becomes very OP due to being able to quickly take out huge chunks of max HP and essentially locking a player out of using healing.

Lower the cost/scale down the body, but also nerf that max HP cutting ability down to Shard of Void levels. As is, it's too unfair to both players in different ways.

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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181793#msg1181793
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2015, 02:50:25 am »
You're all right. It's UP because it's inefficient as a beatstick compared to Purple Dragon, but once it hits the board it becomes very OP due to being able to quickly take out huge chunks of max HP and essentially locking a player out of using healing.

Lower the cost/scale down the body, but also nerf that max HP cutting ability down to Shard of Void levels. As is, it's too unfair to both players in different ways.
I'm not a big fan of the card itself because I feel like even after nerf, its too OP once it hits the board, it completely overshadows SoV, and its not very original anyway. Downvoted.
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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181800#msg1181800
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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1181877#msg1181877
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2015, 01:54:03 am »
This idea has been done before, multiple times as a matter of fact. My take on this concept:
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=54536.msg1139096#msg1139096

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Re: Tranverse Dragon | Segment Dragon https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=57749.msg1182034#msg1182034
« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2015, 05:49:56 am »
Nothing new, cant find an old post of mine to put in the updates.
just balancing stats.

3/12/2015 updates:
reduction of hp, lowering stats
following the mana curve:
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