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Ohmega

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Slow Death | Cheap Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87739#msg87739
« on: June 10, 2010, 06:45:33 pm »
This will be the start of a series of charges using cards.

NAME:
Slow Death
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
7
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
0|0
ABILITY:
Slow Death:
Every Round this card gets one charge. Remove all charges to damage a target equal to numbers of charges.
NAME:
Cheap Death
ELEMENT:
Death
COST:
5
TYPE:
Death
ATK|HP:
0|0
ABILITY:
Slow Death:
Every Round this card gets one charge. Remove all charges to damage a target equal to numbers of charges.
ART:
Ohmega
IDEA:
Ohmega
NOTES:
The Art is only a placeholder and I probably will change the name of the upgrade. Do you have any ideas?
SERIES:
Charging Cards. There's no page now, but when I have amde some more there will be one.
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b00mc1ap

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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87779#msg87779
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2010, 07:24:01 pm »
Nice idea, a poison that works only once however gets charges added until use.

Maybe change the descrition to "When activated, this card deals damage equal to the number of turns that have passed since the card was played." This description makes it easier to understand. I had to scroll down to the notes section to understand the concept.
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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87786#msg87786
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2010, 07:28:09 pm »
Yeah I had a Poblem to get the whole Effect into some little sentences, because I'm mostly using the planpkan Image builder. (only for quantum marks in abilities I use gimp)

But your descriptions has also a flaw, or maybe mine,too. The charges will be rested after use, because it would be op. After 5 rounds you have a card taht does 5 damage to a creature. Next round it then does 6. When it will not be reseted.

What about:
Every Round this card gets a charge. Use the Ability to do damage equal to the charges. The charges then get reseted.
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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87788#msg87788
« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2010, 07:29:55 pm »
How about: This card gets a charge each turn. Remove all charges to damage a target.

EDIT: your first sentence may be better but my second one beats yours for conciseness.
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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87790#msg87790
« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2010, 07:32:12 pm »
Quote from: dracomageat on June 10, 2010, 07:29:55 pm
How about: This card gets a charge each turn. Remove all charges to damage a target.

EDIT: your first sentence may be better but my second one beats yours for conciseness.

Yes I agree that this is what you should write on the card, short and sweet.
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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87799#msg87799
« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2010, 07:37:42 pm »
Ok, sounds good to me. I will change it, but not today. In my country it is 21:30 and I don't want to do much now.
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Re: Slow Death | Slow and Painfull Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg87807#msg87807
« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2010, 07:43:24 pm »
Quote from: Ohmega on June 10, 2010, 07:37:42 pm
Ok, sounds good to me. I will change it, but not today. In my country it is 21:30 and I don't want to do much now.

Germany?? :D
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Re: Slow Death | Cheap Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg88717#msg88717
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2010, 06:49:58 pm »
Yes Germany.

So the new Versions are up. Changed the description and alos changed the name of the upped Version.
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Re: Slow Death | Cheap Death https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=7822.msg88722#msg88722
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2010, 06:53:29 pm »
Quote from: Ohmega on June 11, 2010, 06:49:58 pm
Yes Germany.

So the new Versions are up. Changed the description and alos changed the name of the upped Version.
Cool me too.


Yes it's a lot less confusing now and more straightforward. Hope you get picked.
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