Valkyrie | Valkyrie

[lolicjj]

I hope that crusader has her soul mate, but of course, it was a GIRL, and it was a human!
But, who? A savior girl from the heaven? It must be VALKYRIE!
'Kay, enough for the chit-chat. Let's get started!

NAME: Valkyrie ELEMENT: Light COST: 6 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 0 | 1 TEXT: Gain +N/+X when it comes into play. Both N and X are quarter of and quanta on your pool, up to +5|+7	NAME: Valkyrie ELEMENT: Light COST: 5  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 0 | 2 TEXT: Gain +N/+X when it comes into play. Both N and X are quarter of and quanta on your pool, up to +8|+10

ART: The Background -> http://devonbailey.wordpress.com/2011/03/30/heaven-and-hell-a-rant-by-devon-bailey/ (http://devonbailey.wordpress.com/2011/03/30/heaven-and-hell-a-rant-by-devon-bailey/) The Girl (Valkyrie of course  8) ) -> http://stars.ign.com/dor/objects/14259535/alicia-valkyrie-profile/images/alicia-valkyrie-profile-2-20080610045557121.html (http://stars.ign.com/dor/objects/14259535/alicia-valkyrie-profile/images/alicia-valkyrie-profile-2-20080610045557121.html) *I think the valkyrie you thought was have a shield and a sword, a wing on her back, long silver hair and her face was very beautiful. I know. I just make some DIFFERENCE Combine those two and edit the level and the background shade with APS 7.0 IDEA: cjjkrenzbgt NOTES: Making a synergy with  . What? I know! People think that  is a great mono rush deck with graboid. You're RIGHT. But why  ? There can be  , , , etc. The reason is quite simple. Look at the Valkyrie. Is she flying like a bird? Is she brings resurrection? Is she immortal? No. She Stand up on the ground, in front of the stairway of heaven! And other, if we combine it with  , it will be preeety boooring. You know, blessing wyrm! And more, most of the  creature are airborne! (Photon, dragon, archangel, crusader + Owl's eye, etc)   ? What d you expect? Blessing those immortal creature? Impossible *slappedbyaetherloverppl *   ? Mitosis-ed photon + hope + rustler(pepo!)+ dragon? Still boring. Some of ppl have make the synergy with  . Then  is the great picks! (no. no, no  .   = chaos.   = order. Nay. She battle in the name of justice, and she battle around by herself!   = Anger. Rage. Quit.   ? Hey. She's not a time-traveller!   ? Are you talking about mermaid?!) So that's why i think are a rare synergy! But how about the deck? This is the example. This for the unnuped. My version Code: [Select] 58q 58q 58u 58u 58u 58u 58u 594 594 594 594 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5l9 5l9 5l9 5l9 5l9 5li 5lj 5lj Valkyrie Valkyrie Valkyrie ValkyrieAnd for the upped. Still, my version. Code: [Select] 6rn 6rn 6rn 6rn 77e 77e 77e 77e 77j 77j 77j 77k 77k 7jp 7jp 7jp 7jp 7k4 7k4 Valkyrie Valkyrie Valkyrie Valkyrie 808 808 808 808 80i 80i 80iI like this concept since it was brings you to think as a LUCKY draw, with full of thinking. Now think. You want to use the fractal on the gnome gemfinder (for health) OR for photon (attack on Valkyrie + shield (upped deck) And, on what turns i'll use the fractal of course! I just have limited gnomes and photon. Plus, the photon wasn't generating, unless you play luciferin after that. Plus a pendulum. And it just 5! What should i do to make an easy win? (unupped deck) But, that's not mean just this concept was the the most. You can make in the way you like! Let's take example of... Valky on a Dragon? (Valkyrie, 2 Types of dragon, pends, some perm / spells) Or.. Blessed Warden(Valky, warden, bless, pillar/pends)? Girls united(nymphs, valky, unstat creature, pillars/pends)? It's up your choice. The point is be creative to make a good synergy between light and earth! And this card and the deck made for Community Challenge : Duality's Legacy, Round 2 : Cyberworld (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,26964.msg366669#msg366669) SERIES:

Any comment and suggestion are trully needed, ASAP. (Yeah, because the second term will be started to voted. I need to hurry..)
Thanks ^^,

==EDIT==
I = Edited the card note and skill, make the cost higher, less hp for upped, make limit of gaining. This would be quite hard-time for use as fractal.. but i don't sure.. maybe it must be immaterial (But it absolutely too OP...) Thanks to majofa, Smurff, Jenkar, and Rutatere ^^,

[majofa]

He changed it.
Would it be too strong in these decks?

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58o 58o 58o 58o 58o 58o 58o 58s 58s 594 594 594 594 594 594 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5aa 5l8 5l8 5l8 5li 5li 5li 5li 5li 5lm 5lm 5lm 5lm 5lm 5lm 5mq 5mq 5mq

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6rn 6rn 6rn 7jp 7jp 7jp 7jp 7jp 7jp 7ju 7ju 7k4 7k4 7k4 808 808 808 808 80e 80e 80e 80i 80i 80i 80i 80i 81q 81q 81q 81q

[Smurrf]

You should probably replace the N / X with +N | +X to deconflict the reading.  At first, I was going to say that there was a divide by zero error possible.

Edit: All that said, it's way too powerful a card.  Think Twin universe...or even just the 6 cards you can normally put in your deck.

[Jenkar]

Make the function not linear. Anything lasting based on quanta should have either a threshold, or a non-linear progression, in my opinion.

[Smurrf]

Eh, there's a way to make a soft cap.  Have it be something like "Gains +N|+X, where N and X = number of  your &  cards in play, respectively."

Of course, it wouldn't work for the contest, but still.

[Rutarete]

I'd add to the wording 'when it comes into play' to make it clear when the ability activates.

[lolicjj]

majofa -> For the unupped one, that's quite large deck, but yes, the card will be so powerful with that many quanta generator.. For the upped, I'm not sure i'll use valky because the deck didn't have any earth quanta generator, which didn't change the HP of the valky.. (so it can die quite easily if your enemy play fire buckler, or with lance, absorbing, etc.) but for the attack, i know it will be so huge...

Smurff -> Got what you mean. I'll change the card now. Thanks

Jenkar -> I'm not sure I got what you mean, but i'll tweak the card. Thanks for your advice

Rutatere -> Alright I will change the card notes. Thanks

[Manipul8r]

The +N and +X should have a | not a / between them.  Upgraded is strong (up to 8|12 for 5 ), unupgraded is weak (up to 5|8 for 6 ).  It would be better to make them both have a +8|+8 cap or something, since the upgraded already has a lower cost and higher base HP.