Technology Series

[KingofLlamas]

These are my first cards so here goes! 



Blueprint is the main card you use it make the other cards

Using blueprint you can make these cards




This is meant to be called Flame Tank just a little Typo





















thanks to all the websites that i got the images from and thats all i got hope you enjoyed please comment

[Retribution]

You need a separate thread for each card.

Read this for more information (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5039.0.html)

On another note, every card needs a cost, an unupgraded and upgraded version, and most abilities cost quanta or they can be used freely in any deck.

[bored_ninja777]

also, spelling
its  CHAOS .. not CHOAS.. u have it wrong in card text and title. Immaterial <<<  not imatriel.
One of ur cards the text is too long and u cannot see the entire card effect.
Id say a lot of these are way to over powered. adding 10 damage is quite a lot alongside being a high attack creature.

[moomoose]

its better to have one very polished, balanced card with a great concept and great art (with artist credit, don't just use google images basically) than to have a bunch of unpolished, unbalanced cards with varying levels of concepts/art. 

some ideas have promise- planet ship has an interesting concept, but needs alot of polish, you dont need to give an example of its effect in the card itself.  there needs to be a more clear link between the cards name/image and its effect- why does a "plant ship" being big protect ally creatures? maybe rename the card to something like defensive drone (feel free to be more creative than that), find art that applies and find a skill name that fits what it does better. 

and if one of your ideas involves "instantly kills target creature"- stop and go back.

[ZGiSH]

A 1 cost card to be able to summon a plethora of extremely powerful monsters? Yeah, no. Try again.

Also BA Bomber is ridiculous. 24 DMG on summon? Throw invincibility on that and if you even summon 1 more and you got a guaranteed 5-turn win.

[PhantomFox]

On all the cards, you are lacking the casting cost and the ability costs.  But let's review.

- As material creatures are much more common than immaterial, I don't see how this would benefit me.  It would only work against a mono-aether deck, and that kind of card belonging to aether does not make any sense.  In most cases, this will remove immortality from a handful of creatures, but make many MORE immaterial.  Rework this.

- An average of 12 attack per turn should carry at least a 12 quanta cost.  Even so, 24 damage out of the gate is excessive.  How would this stack with Adrenaline?  Tone it down some.

- We have the Aether Nymph for this already.  Rework this.

- to the...? What?  I'm assuming the opponent, but would that be worth the 10 HP cost?  I'd rather keep the 8 attack creature than sacrifice it.  It'd be a finisher at best.  However, a few of these together could 1-shot a player.  3 of these could deal 84 damage in two turns.  Rework this.

- No insta-kill cards without regards to HP or abnormal status.  EVER.  But this on a 15/10 creature?!  Are you nuts?  A creature with those stats and no ability would be 18 quanta at least.  WITH the ability it would be an "I WIN" card.  No, just no.  Rework this.

- You spelled Chaos wrong, as previously mentioned.  But this would be too unpredictable to use.  Pandemonium and Chaos Seed would be better than this.  Fine tune this.

- So it's the Infection ability with 1 damage up front?  A bit boring...  Rework this

- I kinda like this one, but the ability needs rephrasing to be more professional and concise.  Fine tune this.

- Kinda weak ability.  10 HP isn't going anywhere any time soon.  This is more likely to be mutated, frozen, or rewound than firebolted or the like.  Rework this.

- No insta-kill cards without regards to HP or abnormal status.  Holy Light does something similar, but it's a spell.  This is an "I WIN" card against any deck.  Rework this.

- So it's a weaker freeze.  Okay I guess...

- Does an average of 13 damage?  Make the cost really high.  But even so, 18 damage in one turn is pushing it.  Make the ability cost high too. 

[KingofLlamas]

OK guys im reworking the series quite a lot

[dramore]

No! Just plain No! Elements is a "Fantasy" game not "Sci-fi" game. So to me high tech or most "Machines" do not have a place in it. If you put all machines on a tech level of 1 thru 20 these here would fall along the line of 12 and up. Where as the ones in elements are 8 and below. "Steam Machine" being the level 8 and any bow being a level 2.