This looks like a pretty cool card. it would be nice to see
get some PC.
I would make a small change in some of the wording, just so it flows with the basic feel of other current cards.
---in the text portion I would change the word "Target Artifact" to "Target Permanent", (if this is what you mean, otherwise I may have misread it)
---in the notes I would change the word "Land" to "Pillar/Pendulem". (again, if this is what you mean, otherwise I may have misread it)
Otherwise, cool idea, nice work!