Gravitron Elder|Gravitron Endless

[az4rel]

NAME: Gravitron Elder ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 4 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 1|10 TEXT: If targeted by reverse time gains +3|-3, and start gaining -1|+1 per turn. Inmune to reverse time if more than4Hp.	NAME: Gravitron Endless ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 4 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 1|10 TEXT: If targeted by reverse time gains +2|-4, and start gaining -0|+2 per turn. Inmune to reverse time if more than4Hp

ART: filler art my me IDEA: az4rel NOTES: atempt at the ccc competition. this is basically a creature you can buff with Reverse Time and rewind, but the unupped resets to original stats and the upped start growing Hp.

[OldTrees]

don't forget to post in the CCC thread.
This card fits thematically IMO.
Balancing buffs and CC in the immunities was wise.
It might deserve 6hp.

[icecoldbro]

Slight comment, in card it says "accelated", when it should be accelerated *Which is stated correctly in form below*, I agree with OldTrees, this card does deserve 6 Health, making it a little more Gravity like and a slightly needed buff. Still not good enough even let's say with 6 Health, to compare for it's younger sibling, Graviton Guard, as Acceleration will definitely become staple in every Gravity deck once it's released.
Recommendations:
6 Health
Can be accelerated.

[QuantumT]

I don't think I really like it all that much. It seems like most of the time it will function exactly like the graviton guard, and anytime it behaves differently it's for the worse. The immunity to delay and reverse time isn't even really worth anything, because basically the only time that your opponent would even bother to rewind or delay this would be when it was accelerated or adrenalined.

[godofdeath500]

I don't think I really like it all that much. It seems like most of the time it will function exactly like the graviton guard, and anytime it behaves differently it's for the worse. The immunity to delay and reverse time isn't even really worth anything, because basically the only time that your opponent would even bother to rewind or delay this would be when it was accelerated or adrenalined.

I agree. Maybe make it immune to plagues or something else like that (but you could achieve the same effect with a quint). This card leaves me at a loss as to what to suggest, since you don't really leave me much to work on. And as I said, why chose this over using a quint (and I know you might say in a mono-gravity deck, but even in a mono deck, this card isn't that helpful).

[az4rel]

card fixed is no longer a crappy copy of Graviton Mercenary, but im not sure if it still qualifies for the ccc semivanilla comp.

[OldTrees]

Skeleton qualifies as semi-vanilla.
So does this however its ability is a little strange.
When ready post it in the CCC thread.

[M4ck]

Nice idea. I like to be inquisitive about cards that get my attention, so... If it is rewound to, say, -1 HP, does it die, become 0 HP (attack once and die, like Spark), or gets put back on top of your deck?

[az4rel]

Nice idea. I like to be inquisitive about cards that get my attention, so... If it is rewound to, say, -1 HP, does it die, become 0 HP (attack once and die, like Spark), or gets put back on top of your deck?

rewound! I knew rewind was an irregular verb thanks for that!
also I had not considered putting it on the top of the deck, is a great idea!
that or transforming it into a graviton baby lol.
i'll change the card to fix grammar and add that.

[az4rel]

ok. im done now, based the new wording on the mummy wording.
if it is still too dificult to understand please help me with the wording.
also if it is OP or UP let me know.