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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg324609#msg324609
« Reply #24 on: May 01, 2011, 10:24:30 pm »
Quote from: Genuinous on May 01, 2011, 10:05:30 pm
Quote from: OldTrees on May 01, 2011, 10:00:13 pm
The bottom url is the correct one.
What's the difference? Just wondering....
Some links give a thumbnail (the small image)


I think that the halving of the variable would be better in the card text than on the card image.
N = Half the damage reduced by your shield last turn
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg324613#msg324613
« Reply #25 on: May 01, 2011, 10:29:37 pm »
Quote from: OldTrees on May 01, 2011, 10:24:30 pm
I think that the halving of the variable would be better in the card text than on the card image.
N = Half the damage reduced by your shield last turn
Hmm. Yeah. You're right. Will change this.
What about the card itself? Is it interresting and unique enough? This is the first card I made and I can't valuate it yet.
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg324632#msg324632
« Reply #26 on: May 01, 2011, 10:43:47 pm »
Quote from: avantasia666 on May 01, 2011, 10:29:37 pm
Quote from: OldTrees on May 01, 2011, 10:24:30 pm
I think that the halving of the variable would be better in the card text than on the card image.
N = Half the damage reduced by your shield last turn
Hmm. Yeah. You're right. Will change this.
What about the card itself? Is it interresting and unique enough? This is the first card I made and I can't valuate it yet.
What standard do you want me to judge it against?

From my 6 characteristics listed here: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,25096.0.html
2) It fulfills: balanceable, creative, and has its niche
1) It partially fulfills: thematic (the name could fit the card type better)
0) It does not fulfill: works as a standalone and has varied uses
I would rate that as 7/12 or  :aether :air :darkness :death :earth :entropy :fire.
That is a good card compared to its average peer in the crucible but I would not add it to the game due to there being better cards to add IMO.
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg324651#msg324651
« Reply #27 on: May 01, 2011, 11:03:49 pm »
Quote from: OldTrees on May 01, 2011, 10:43:47 pm
What standard do you want me to judge it against?

From my 6 characteristics listed here: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,25096.0.html
2) It fulfills: balanceable, creative, and has its niche
1) It partially fulfills: thematic (the name could fit the card type better)
0) It does not fulfill: works as a standalone and has varied uses
I would rate that as 7/12 or  :aether :air :darkness :death :earth :entropy :fire.
That is a good card compared to its average peer in the crucible but I would not add it to the game due to there being better cards to add IMO.
Okay. Thank you for your review. This was my first card so I don't ecpected it to be perfect. But it's good to hear I didn't make everything wrong.  :)
I think I will try to submit it to crucible just to see more meanings to this card and by this learning more about card creation.
Maybe a better name is found too. Just thought it's so frustrating if all damage vanished by shieldeffects it would fit.  :D
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg326762#msg326762
« Reply #28 on: May 04, 2011, 04:13:23 pm »
CURATOR COMMENT:
-Please move the text preceding your table to the NOTES section of the table.
-Please change the ATK|HP section of your table such that it matches the text shown in the card image. ("N/2|4" should be "N|4" and so on)
-Please change the IDEA section of your table such that it shows your exact forum name ("Avantasia666" should be "avantasia666")
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg327426#msg327426
« Reply #29 on: May 05, 2011, 07:19:45 am »
Quote from: TimerClock14 on May 04, 2011, 04:13:23 pm
CURATOR COMMENT:
-Please move the text preceding your table to the NOTES section of the table.
-Please change the ATK|HP section of your table such that it matches the text shown in the card image. ("N/2|4" should be "N|4" and so on)
-Please change the IDEA section of your table such that it shows your exact forum name ("Avantasia666" should be "avantasia666")
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Re: Ghost of frustration | Ghost of frustration https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=25452.msg331969#msg331969
« Reply #30 on: May 12, 2011, 03:22:41 am »
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-You must credit the ART source correctly. http://www.sxc.hu/photo/727484 - Based on that link alone, below the picture is the 'Availability' area, where it states that you should notify (I assume you've already done this) and credit him accordingly.
-Please capitalize the name, 'Frustration' in your title thread and card name (image and table section).

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