Ice Wall | Arctic Wall

[karis]

NAME: Ice Wall ELEMENT: Water COST: 2  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 0|7 TEXT: Freeze who dealt damage to this card for 3 turns. gravity pull.	NAME: Arctic Wall ELEMENT: Water COST: 5  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 0/20 TEXT: Congeal who dealt damage to this card for 4 turns. gravity pull.

ART: non IDEA: karis NOTES: don't have anything so much....  it's only defence your life for a while....   that's all  SERIES: none

[bored_ninja777]

It seems like it could be helpful to .
you just need to fix your wording.
This is my interpretation of what you wanted

Any creature or weapon that does damage to this card is frozen. (congealed for upped
(passive= gravity pull) << this wouldn't be on the card but would just show up like chimera has its gravity pull.

[karis]

yes  i'm know that my english was a bit bad.....  (or maybe not only a bit...)

gravity pull part is look like graboid that come in to play with auto burrow

[Pineapple]

It seems like it could be helpful to .
you just need to fix your wording.
This is my interpretation of what you wanted

Any creature or weapon that does damage to this card is frozen. (congealed for upped
(passive= gravity pull) << this wouldn't be on the card but would just show up like chimera has its gravity pull.

Actually, Chimera has gravity pull on its card. "Combine all your creatures in a single one. Gravity pull, momentum."

In addition, the creation of this card calls for another card idea... FIREWALL! kills any attacking monster that has the skill infection, plague, or venom.

[Higurashi]

I'd say the unupped creature needs at least 15 to be useful. That would also fall in line with how most upgrades work; they provide a small improvement or change. Not make it thrice as good.
You'll need to spell Gravity pull with a capital letter, and Freeze = 3 turns, Congeal = 4 turns. No need to specify how long they're frozen/congealed. Thus, I suggest the following wording: "Creatures that deal damage to this card are frozen. Gravity pull."
Replace "frozen" with "congealed" for the upped card. Now, I know the spell Congeal specifies how long a creature is frozen, but it also calls it just that; frozen. Squid doesn't. I think it's a good thing to have separate terms for them. Consistent, and encourages the individual player to do research.

[dramore]

Try this for wording

unupgraded                                         upgraded

Freeze any source that                        Congeal any source that
deals damage to this                           deals damage to this
creature. Enters play                            creature. Enters play
with Gravity Pull.                                   with Gravity Pull.


With it like this any spell that hits it is a players source and the only part of a player that can be frozen/congealed is the weapon.
Also by the way Gravity Pull does not effect a players weapon unless they make it flying.

In addition, the creation of this card calls for another card idea... FIREWALL! kills any attacking monster that has the skill infection, plague, or venom.

Firewall is already a card... sort of .  It's the name of the skill on "Fireshield/Firebuckler".

[karis]

Also by the way Gravity Pull does not effect a players weapon unless they make it flying.

ah... i'm absolutely forget about that...

if i'm change they word to be 'Freeze the creature that deal dmg to this creature'  are that will be alright?   cuz in the end it's can't freeze your enemy weapon.

[dramore]

Also by the way Gravity Pull does not effect a players weapon unless they make it flying.

ah... i'm absolutely forget about that...

if i'm change they word to be 'Freeze the creature that deal dmg to this creature'  are that will be alright?   cuz in the end it's can't freeze your enemy weapon.

oh yes you can freeze your enemy's weapon just look at Voodoo Doll if it freezes so does the enemy's weapon.

[karis]

ah... not meaning like that.

i'm mean this card can't freeze enemy weapon by it gravity pull skill.  then i'm don't have to think about the word that can use to everything.   only creature is enough.