Fallen phoenix|Fallen Phoenix

[pheonixoflight]

here is my second attempt of making card post

NAME: Fallen Phoenix ELEMENT: COST: 8 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 9|1 TEXT: Bring Down:when killed a random enemy creature with <4 health dies with Fallen Phoenix	NAME: Fallen Phoenix ELEMENT: COST: 7 TYPE: creature ATK|HP: 9|1 TEXT: Bring Down:when killed a random enemy creature with <4 health dies with Fallen Phoenix

ART: pheonixoflight IDEA: pheonixoflight NOTES: Fallen Pheonix is NOT airborne SERIES: might go in a series about dragons and pheonixes

[TheIdioticIdiot]

name in the table of the unupped version is wrong...
looks ok on glimpse...
(slightly off-topic: as much as I love phoenixes, a series for them is not very, um... can't find the right word...)

[DeathPanda1]

hmmm, what do you mean by 4 damage? and for something with 9 att maybe up the cost by 1 other then that i really like the card

[pheonixoflight]

hmmm, what do you mean by 4 damage? and for something with 9 att maybe up the cost by 1 other then that i really like the card

it means any enemy creture with 4 att or less will be killed

[Jappert]

- Replace the words "Darkness Quanta" with the  emblem (next to the smilies)
- Phoenix is spelled Phoenix
- Change 9/1 to 9|1
- Type: Creature
- Text: Bring Down : when killed, a random enemy creature with less than 4 attack dies also.
- Art interferes with the text, you need to resize it so it fits the box.

Good job though, these are just some pointers to make it better.

[Sevs]

I like the idea of a dark phoenix. I agree with the previous post that the cost needs to be increased by 1 or so. Also to stick with a phoenix theme should the killed creature be turned into ash? just a suggestion

[pheonixoflight]

I like the idea of a dark phoenix. I agree with the previous post that the cost needs to be increased by 1 or so. Also to stick with a phoenix theme should the killed creature be turned into ash? just a suggestion

the fire pheonix turns into ash

[GG]

1. You're seeking the wrath of napalm by misspelling phOEnix (not pheonix).

2. Try to refine the card description
 Old : Bring Down:when killed a random enemy creature with less than 4 damage dies also
 New : Bring Down: When Dark Phoenix is killed, a random enemy creature with <4 health dies.

[TheIdioticIdiot]

^^
nah... this guy won't catch nap's wrath...
as long as you are enthusiastic about phoenixes, she won't bite...

on topic: would the name "Fallen Phoenix" be better? since it fits the dark theme, and it will fit the not-airborne thing as well

[Sevs]

I like the idea of a dark phoenix. I agree with the previous post that the cost needs to be increased by 1 or so. Also to stick with a phoenix theme should the killed creature be turned into ash? just a suggestion

the fire pheonix turns into ash

sorry if i wasnt specific, the random creature that dies turns into ash.

[pheonixoflight]

- Replace the words "Darkness Quanta" with the  emblem (next to the smilies)
- Phoenix is spelled Phoenix
- Change 9/1 to 9|1
- Type: Creature
- Text: Bring Down : when killed, a random enemy creature with less than 4 attack dies also.
- Art interferes with the text, you need to resize it so it fits the box.

Good job though, these are just some pointers to make it better.

i cant get the art to fit when using microsoft picture manager i type in 256 by 256 and it ends up going something like 300 by 245

[Sevs]

- Replace the words "Darkness Quanta" with the  emblem (next to the smilies)
- Phoenix is spelled Phoenix
- Change 9/1 to 9|1
- Type: Creature
- Text: Bring Down : when killed, a random enemy creature with less than 4 attack dies also.
- Art interferes with the text, you need to resize it so it fits the box.

Good job though, these are just some pointers to make it better.

i cant get the art to fit when using microsoft picture manager i type in 256 by 256 and it ends up going something like 300 by 245

Idk if this matters but I think the picture has to be a square first before you can do that