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Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg308566#msg308566
« on: April 09, 2011, 01:20:34 am »
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NAME:
Factory
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
:time
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
All quanta production from one stack of pillars/pendulums is doubled for 4 turns. Delay the stack for 4 turns.
NAME:
Industry
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
:time
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
All quanta production from one stack of pillars/pendulums is doubled for 4 turns. Delay the stack for 3 turns.
ART:
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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg308859#msg308859
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 05:14:07 pm »
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Real world editorial probably should not be in a card game.
Elements is a Fantasy world. Real world matters do not apply.

"All quanta production is doubled for 3 turns."
Interesting effect but fire does not get something for nothing so a suitable cost needs to be attached.

"Add 4 poison."
Unfortunately/fortunately Fire is not Death so poison is not a reasonable cost.
Fire is about destruction so perhaps the spell triples the quanta production of a stack for 3 turns but destroys half the stack?
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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg308874#msg308874
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 05:50:24 pm »
[Leaving this blank, as I am asked.] is not blank
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Real world editorial probably should not be in a card game.
Elements is a Fantasy world. Real world matters do not apply.

"All quanta production is doubled for 3 turns."
Interesting effect but fire does not get something for nothing so a suitable cost needs to be attached.

"Add 4 poison."
Unfortunately/fortunately Fire is not Death so poison is not a reasonable cost.
Fire is about destruction so perhaps the spell triples the quanta production of a stack for 3 turns but destroys half the stack?
Sounds good. Although I like the mechanic, perhaps it could be renamed as Death or Other?
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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg308914#msg308914
« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 06:27:12 pm »
Sounds good. Although I like the mechanic, perhaps it could be renamed as Death or Other?
Short term advantage at the cost of long term is not something I would associate with Death's slow decay strategy.
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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg309007#msg309007
« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 08:26:48 pm »
Alright, I'll change the card. Unless it might be an Other card?
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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg309055#msg309055
« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 10:26:01 pm »
The effect might work in  :fire (burning sacrifice/Immolation) ,  :time (you speed up quantum production), or  :gravity (taking mass from one pillar and channeling it onto another pillar).

I took one of the game's unused art and recolored it a bit, it's meant to resemble an overloading pillar. Would this work?

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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg309100#msg309100
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2011, 12:14:02 am »
The effect might work in  :fire (burning sacrifice/Immolation) ,  :time (you speed up quantum production), or  :gravity (taking mass from one pillar and channeling it onto another pillar).

I took one of the game's unused art and recolored it a bit, it's meant to resemble an overloading pillar. Would this work?

not bad art for a factory card, also gives another purpose for the old pillar art.

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Re: Factory | Industry https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=24152.msg311391#msg311391
« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2011, 11:54:13 pm »
The effect might work in  :fire (burning sacrifice/Immolation) ,  :time (you speed up quantum production), or  :gravity (taking mass from one pillar and channeling it onto another pillar).

I took one of the game's unused art and recolored it a bit, it's meant to resemble an overloading pillar. Would this work?

not bad art for a factory card, also gives another purpose for the old pillar art.
Hmmmmm...Time? Speeding it up, then freezing all production for so many turns? Yes...I likey.

The art looks good, yet needs maybe some splinters of pillar exploding from it? Other than that, it's really good. Credz!
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