Entropic Energy / Entropic Miracle

[dberube4]

so i must post in Link Crucible Candidates Here!

[guolin]

Yup, exactly. Problem is, Kael is putting non-Trials entries on hold; however, since he already took a look at yours, he might move it. Either that, or he'll mark it as Crucible Ready and move it once the 10-day period of Phase 1 is over.

[dberube4]

Yup, exactly. Problem is, Kael is putting non-Trials entries on hold; however, since he already took a look at yours, he might move it. Either that, or he'll mark it as Crucible Ready and move it once the 10-day period of Phase 1 is over.

Thanks    :

[Kuroaitou]

...So I don't think you quite understand what Kael meant by "The wording must be exactly the same." ^^;;;

Look at your ability and the difference between that AND the card art image. Your (non-upgraded card) ability states:

"All your monsters without skill have now a weak skill"

when your card says:

"All your creatures without skill have now a weak skill"

Monsters isn't the same as creatures. On that note, you should probably fix the grammar in there while editing the card art to something along the lines of: "All of your creatures without skills now have a weak skill." That statement is a lot more fluid and corrects all the issues regarding pluralism, parallelism, and priority order in terms of action-description combos. But I don't think poor grammar is something that will completely prevent your idea from entering Level 1.

Oh, and please put the artist credit in the bottom left corner of your image for both cards, as it's ~purple-whirlpool's art, not yours.

[dberube4]

...So I don't think you quite understand what Kael meant by "The wording must be exactly the same." ^^;;;

Look at your ability and the difference between that AND the card art image. Your (non-upgraded card) ability states:

"All your monsters without skill have now a weak skill"

when your card says:

"All your creatures without skill have now a weak skill"

Monsters isn't the same as creatures. On that note, you should probably fix the grammar in their while editing the card art to something along the lines of: "All of your creatures without skills now have a weak skill." That statement is a lot more fluid and corrects all the issues regarding pluralism, parallelism, and priority order in terms of action-description combos. But I don't think poor grammar is something that will completely prevent your idea from entering Level 1.

Oh, and please put the artist credit in the bottom left corner of your image for both cards, as it's ~purple-whirlpool's art, not yours.

Wow...

1 word: Thanks

1: For the Bump 
2: Grammar
3:The difference

[Kuroaitou]

...okay, I kind of missed something now that I realized it.

http://browse.deviantart.com/digitalart/?q=entropy&order=9&offset=24#/d11ctus

On the right of the picture, there usually needs to be a 'Download Image' button to ensure that you can use their art without permission (unless stated otherwise). Because there IS no button on the right side (in fact, there's a 'Shop for Similar Print' option instead), you need to get permission from the author to use their art. (or find another image, but the choice is up to you)

[Kael Hate]

That image has no download for use. You'll have to get permission or change the art.

On the right of the picture, there usually needs to be a 'Download Image' button to ensure that it's royalty free. Because there IS no button on the right side (in fact, there's a 'Shop for Similar Print' option instead), you need to get permission from the author to use their art. (or find another royalty free image, but the choice is up to you)

That download button doesn't have anything to do with being Royalty Free. It is an option that deviantart members can allow so you as a viewer can download the image for personal use.

[Kuroaitou]

On the right of the picture, there usually needs to be a 'Download Image' button to ensure that it's royalty free. Because there IS no button on the right side (in fact, there's a 'Shop for Similar Print' option instead), you need to get permission from the author to use their art. (or find another royalty free image, but the choice is up to you)

That download button doesn't have anything to do with being Royalty Free. It is an option that deviantart members can allow so you as a viewer can download the image for personal use.

Oh!

But if I may assume though, the 'download button' does provide the option for members of the Elements community to use that image for card art without permission, correct? (Otherwise, you can still download it but ask the artist to let you use their art)

[Kael Hate]

But if I may assume though, the 'download button' does provide the option for members of the Elements community to use that image for card art without permission, correct? (Otherwise, you can still download it but ask the artist to let you use their art)

Yes, because the card ideas are just a personal demonstration of what you'd like to see in the game and the Deviant has given you the picture for personal use, we allow its use here with credit. A Deviant may still have other restrictions on the use of their work or ask for it to be removed from here, but it is felt that with credit and and the allowance given from the Deviant that we are within the grounds of fair-use.

[snowballfr]

I don't think that destroy is a weak skill (butterfly effect)! On the contrary, I think vampire is one (liquid shadow).