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Enriched Sands | Enriched Earth https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17343.msg220680#msg220680
« on: December 10, 2010, 02:12:15 am »
NAME:
Enriched Sands
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4  :earth
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
-
TEXT:
All burrowed creatures gain +1|+1 and regain one health every turn. Absorb  :water :water per turn.
NAME:
Enriched Earth
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
5  :earth
TYPE:
Permanent
ATK|HP:
-
TEXT:
All burrowed creatures gain +2|+1 and regain one health every turn. Absorb  :water :water per turn.
ART:
Unknown: http://www.newsrealblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/golden-sands.jpg
IDEA:
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NOTES:
The stat increase does not go up every turn, it only happens once, and disappears if the permanent is destroyed. All burrowed creatures will regain 1 HP every turn if it has been damaged. This card will affect your opponent as well.
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Re: Enriched Sands | Enriched Earth https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17343.msg220717#msg220717
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2010, 02:45:12 am »
Probably could be made a lot cheaper to cast, considering the upkeep.

I like adding another earth/water combo to pair with Trident.

The wording is a little misleading because it sounds like the +1 +1 is cumulative.  Maybe it should be two sentences like:
All burrowed creatures gain +1 +1
All burrowed creatures are healed 1Hp each turn
Absorb :water :water

Don't like the picture, the desert doesn't fit with "Enriched" or a :water :water ability
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Re: Enriched Sands | Enriched Earth https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17343.msg220718#msg220718
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2010, 02:46:45 am »
Quote from: plastiqe on December 10, 2010, 02:45:12 am
Probably could be made a lot cheaper to cast, considering the upkeep.

I like adding another earth/water combo to pair with Trident.

The wording is a little misleading because it sounds like the +1 +1 is cumulative.  Maybe it should be two sentences like:
All burrowed creatures gain +1 +1
All burrowed creatures are healed 1Hp each turn
Absorb :water :water

Don't like the picture, the desert doesn't fit with "Enriched" or a :water :water ability
The wording does sound better the way you wrote it.
What do you suggest the picture look like?
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Re: Enriched Sands | Enriched Earth https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17343.msg220730#msg220730
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2010, 03:01:25 am »
I think it should look more like "Enriched Sands" and "Enriched Earth" so like some healty wet soil or floodplains or something like that.
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Re: Enriched Sands | Enriched Earth https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=17343.msg222269#msg222269
« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2010, 08:28:32 pm »
Quote from: plastiqe on December 10, 2010, 03:01:25 am
I think it should look more like "Enriched Sands" and "Enriched Earth" so like some healty wet soil or floodplains or something like that.
I can't find any good pictures of that. I guess this could suffice for now, but does anyone have any other comments/criticism/feedback?
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