Emerald Tiger | Lither Tiger

[OldTrees]

The ability to remove passive abilities is a dangerous (chimera) and restricting (no "slow" passive) mechanic. The benefit it provides is not nearly enough to compensate for the cost.

Well, it don't say "Remove ...skill" it says only "..Have chance to..", so for every bite or claws, it have chance not a 100%

That is irrelevant. The suggestion to make passives removable removes the ability to design unremovable abilities.

[EmeraldTiger]

The first part is to show you what it looks like. At the bottom is the code you will need if you like it.

NAME: Emerald Tiger ELEMENT: Lither COST: 5 (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: TEXT: (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) Numbing Bite: Target creature is Delayed 1 round per use of active skill. (Cumulative)

NAME: Lither Tiger ELEMENT: Lither COST: 4 (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: TEXT: (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image) Numbing Bite: Target creature is Delayed 1 round per use of active skill. (Cumulative)

ART: EmeraldTiger IDEA: Prnc Athrr, EmeraldTiger NOTES: SERIES:

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Emerald Tiger
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Lither
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5 [desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc]
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Creature
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[desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc] [desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc] Numbing Bite: Target creature is Delayed 1 round per use of active skill. (Cumulative)
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[td][table][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299] NAME: [/color][/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Lither Tiger
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Lither
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4 [desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc]
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299][color=#C9C299] TYPE: [/color][/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
Creature
[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299][color=#C9C299] ATK|HP: [/color][/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]

[/td][/tr][tr][td][right][b][size=8pt][color=#C9C299][color=#C9C299] TEXT: [/color][/color][/size][/b][/right][/td][td]
[desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc] [desc= :life or :aether][img width=18 height=18]http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=32706.0;attach=3187;image[/img][/desc] Numbing Bite: Target creature is Delayed 1 round per use of active skill. (Cumulative)
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EmeraldTiger
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Prnc Athrr, EmeraldTiger
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[Drake_XIV]

How exactly is it cumulative if the target is delayed and can't use their ability?

[EmeraldTiger]

Prnc Athrr, fix thread title. make it say: Emerald Tiger | Lither Tiger

How exactly is it cumulative if the target is delayed and can't use their ability?

1st time ability is used delayed 1 turn then if bit again it adds to delay and if ability is used again it adds to the delay.

[Naesala]

Hah! ET as a card. hmm, this gives me an idea for a humor thread...

Hm, as for the actual card itself, I think it's fair and balanced.

[Prnc Athrr]

Does anyone have any question or reason this can't be submitted?

[OldTrees]

Does anyone have any question or reason this can't be submitted?

Yes.
How does the following fit in Life?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

How does the following fit in Aether?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

Both questions need sufficient answers for the current cost design.

[EmeraldTiger]

Does anyone have any question or reason this can't be submitted?

Yes.
How does the following fit in Life?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

How does the following fit in Aether?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

Both questions need sufficient answers for the current cost design.

I will answer since the idea primarily came from me.
The Delaying grows each time target is bit or uses ability.
The Delaying is an electrical surge that seizes the body when ability is used.

[OldTrees]

Does anyone have any question or reason this can't be submitted?

Yes.
How does the following fit in Life?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

How does the following fit in Aether?
Delaying Poison triggered by victim's ability usage

Both questions need sufficient answers for the current cost design.

I will answer since the idea primarily came from me.
The Delaying grows each time target is bit or uses ability.
The Delaying is an electrical surge that seizes the body when ability is used.

The ability has 3 parts:
Delay [ shock induced paralysis]
Cumulative with Bites [ growth? Like Warden?]
Triggers when creature uses ability. [ shocks caused by ability usage]

Your explanation is 50-75% complete. If you can explain the delay in terms of Life then I would call that sufficient.