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Title: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: casthegamer on May 03, 2010, 03:28:56 am
(http://i43.tinypic.com/zmh8nk.jpg)
(http://i40.tinypic.com/hty3qh.jpg)
NAME:
Corrupted Soul
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
5
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
9|3
ABILITY:
Sacrifice a creature with 5 or more HP when you play this card. It gains 1 :darkness:N, where N is the creatures ability.
ART BY:
Provided by Contest, Edited by casthegamer
IDEA BY:
casthegamer
NAME:
Corrupted Wraith
ELEMENT:
Darkness
COST:
4
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
9|3
ABILITY:
Sacrifice a creature with 5 or more HP when you play this card. It gains 1 :darkness:N, where N is the creatures ability.
ART BY:
Provided by Contest, Edited by casthegamer
IDEA BY:
casthegamer
NOTES: [/color][/b]
From the hand, this card acts like a spell targeting your own creatures. If you chose a legal target, the creature is sacrificed and this creature is put into play.
SERIES: [/color][/b]
Card 3/3 submitted to 'Epic 3 Card Design Challenge' (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,6012.msg69219#msg69219)
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: Terroking on May 03, 2010, 03:32:59 am
What can I say... OP

At least make the ability cost something. Maybe  :darkness :darkness :darkness or the same as it was on the original creature.
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: assassim on May 03, 2010, 03:36:33 am
It would be more balanced if you took out the ability part (devour)?

btw did you give her a boob job?   :o
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: kintar on May 03, 2010, 03:41:08 am
Use it on a oty/scarab, and you get a 9 HP devourer that can devour for free. FFQ is pretty OP as well. But the worst would be a buffed leaf dragon... infinite  :life for free? Pretty OP if you ask me.
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: mokasu on May 03, 2010, 03:51:23 am
You should lower its att and def,cuz its ability to use an effect for free,is OP enough.With its stat,ill say a deck with 6 of this can be pretty damn strong...  :-X
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: casthegamer on May 03, 2010, 03:52:38 am
Quote from: kintar on May 03, 2010, 03:41:08 am
Use it on a oty/scarab, and you get a 9 HP devourer that can devour for free. FFQ is pretty OP as well. But the worst would be a buffed leaf dragon... infinite  :life for free? Pretty OP if you ask me.
hm, didn't think about leaf dragon. you really can't do too much damage with a lot of life quanta, but i'm not fan of infinite combos. i'll increase the cost to 1 :darkness.
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: casthegamer on May 03, 2010, 04:10:37 am
THE CARD HAS BEEN UPDATED IN OP
ability cost has been increased, and HP reduced.

discussion up to this point has been over this version:
(http://i41.tinypic.com/sq6z5v.jpg) (http://i40.tinypic.com/9theup.jpg)

Quote from: assassim on May 03, 2010, 03:36:33 am
It would be more balanced if you took out the ability part (devour)?

btw did you give her a boob job?   :o
i reduced the HP so as to make the synergy with devour less scary.

and yes, i moved them to her stomach. much better i think.  :P
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: Kamietsu on May 03, 2010, 02:00:32 pm
5 cost for 9 damage? Either up the cost or lower the attack.
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: casthegamer on May 03, 2010, 04:03:52 pm
Quote from: Kamietsu on May 03, 2010, 02:00:32 pm
5 cost for 9 damage? Either up the cost or lower the attack.
you have to sac a creature to have it enter play. the cost of two physical cards, and the cost to put the previous card into play is included in the cost. 5 for 9 is completely reasonable in this scenario. i'm not going to nerf this card out of existence.
Title: Re: E3CDC - Corrupted Soul/Corrupted Wraith
Post by: Gaff on May 03, 2010, 06:43:05 pm
Quote from: casthegamer on May 03, 2010, 04:03:52 pm
Quote from: Kamietsu on May 03, 2010, 02:00:32 pm
5 cost for 9 damage? Either up the cost or lower the attack.
you have to sac a creature to have it enter play. the cost of two physical cards, and the cost to put the previous card into play is included in the cost. 5 for 9 is completely reasonable in this scenario. i'm not going to nerf this card out of existence.
So basically this is a spell a bit like blessing that costs 5 :darkness and grants (up to) +9 / +4 and can only be played on creatures with >= 5 hp? It would be easier to comprehend if you rewrote it as a spell I think.
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