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Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446001#msg446001
« on: January 05, 2012, 11:26:35 pm »
NAME:
Raphael
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
3 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 6
TEXT:
:light :light :light :light :light Cure:
Remove 1 poison counter from all of your creatures
NAME:
Raphael
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
3 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 6
TEXT:
:light :light :light Cure:
Remove 1 poison counter from all your creatures
ART:
IDEA:
Amheug-ui Maseuteo
NOTES:
SERIES:
Light Elemental Series
My last idea of the day. Promise.

Any card art would be greatly appreciated, as will thoughts and suggestions.

As always, if this is a copy I do apologise, link me to the original thread and I'll let this die.

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Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446005#msg446005
« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 11:30:17 pm »
Ummm... I saw that someone told you it was a good idea to post all of your ideas at once, but if you have so many ideas I'd suggest posting a few at a time to not push so many cards off the front page.

As the card itself, it's redundant with Guardian Angel (who already does a good amount of healing for :light ) and doesn't do as effective a job. I'd suggest lowering the HP and raising the attack.

Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446007#msg446007
« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 11:32:10 pm »
Oh I'm holding back, trust me. I'll only be posting one or two a day from now on. Sorry if I get on anyone's nerves, I just like having feedback on my ideas and this seems to be the only place to do it as I can't build a portfolio or anything similar. Sorry =/

But it has nothing to do with healing, it just gets rid of poison counters so I'm not sure where you're going with that one.

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Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446011#msg446011
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 11:36:23 pm »
Oh I'm holding back, trust me. I'll only be posting one or two a day from now on. Sorry if I get on anyone's nerves, I just like having feedback on my ideas and this seems to be the only place to do it as I can't build a portfolio or anything similar. Sorry =/

But it has nothing to do with healing, it just gets rid of poison counters so I'm not sure where you're going with that one.
Angel's Healing is repeatable and counters poison, but it also works with Rage Potion, Armagio, CC, etc...
This card just counters poison. It probably wouldn't used very much in any deck, even for fun. (Generally when you make a card you also want to think about how it'll be used ingame with other cards.)

Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446014#msg446014
« Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 11:44:03 pm »
Updated.

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Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446016#msg446016
« Reply #5 on: January 05, 2012, 11:45:19 pm »
this has been attempted in a few different ways.
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Re: Raphael / Raphael https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=35433.msg446018#msg446018
« Reply #6 on: January 05, 2012, 11:48:16 pm »
For future reference, you can start a thread in Pre-Smithy Ideas (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/board,442) for things like that pillar series of yours, as opposed to flooding the front page.

The idea itself has been suggested before (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,9565) (to pick one example). Your version has a ridiculously high ability cost. I personally dislike the idea of making already weak cards like Plague, Aflatoxin, Parasite, etc. weaker.
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