I'm at work, so I cannot see the images of the card due to webblocker, but it does sound interesting. I like the name of the card, for sure. How about, "Particle Fissure"? I can think of so many particle combo's off of the top of my head, particles are awesome!
On second thought. Make it a permanent, thus somewhat nulling the op due to destroy, steal, and pulverizer, and call it a "clockwork particle coil" and have it damage you instead of itself. This will weaken the card itself, but not take away or weaken its ability.