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Re: Weightlessness|Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1027138#msg1027138
« Reply #12 on: December 31, 2012, 04:29:20 pm »
Just a little note.. I'm not a native, but should:
"... If used on shield it lost it's ability for turn"
not rather be
"... If used on a shield it loses its ability for a turn" ?

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Re: Weightlessness|Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1027142#msg1027142
« Reply #13 on: December 31, 2012, 04:39:41 pm »
Just a little note.. I'm not a native, but should:
"... If used on shield it lost it's ability for turn"
not rather be
"... If used on a shield it loses its ability for a turn" ?
Oh you're right... I don't know why, but I always make stupid mistakes... Sorry >.<

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Re: Weightlessness|Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1046208#msg1046208
« Reply #14 on: February 27, 2013, 07:19:47 am »
Just a little note.. I'm not a native, but should:
"... If used on shield it lost it's ability for turn"
not rather be
"... If used on a shield it loses its ability for a turn" ?
Oh you're right... I don't know why, but I always make stupid mistakes... Sorry >.<

Actually, you were right. If the 'it' owns something, no apostrophe is used.
However, it should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'.
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Re: Weightlessness|Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1046286#msg1046286
« Reply #15 on: February 27, 2013, 03:17:10 pm »
So the theory of the Spacetime Continuum became an element? :O :p

Some wording changes:

Don't -> doesn't
Target pendulum -> target pendulum stack.
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Re: Weightlessness | Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1047571#msg1047571
« Reply #16 on: March 03, 2013, 12:51:50 am »
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This card will not be permitted into the Crucible due to one or more of the following errors:

  • Table filled out incorrectly.

Correct these errors as soon as possible and feel free to submit again when ready.

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Please chose either 'spacetime' or 'gravity' to put in the 'Element' box. Thanks.
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Re: Weightlessness|Chronostasis https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=45509.msg1047637#msg1047637
« Reply #17 on: March 03, 2013, 07:20:48 am »
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