Time Traveler | Beginner Time Traveler

[CarlosCai]

NAME: Time Traveler ELEMENT: Time COST: 7 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4 | 6 TEXT: Go to Past: Put "Time Traveler" in the top of your deck.	NAME: Beginner Time Traveler ELEMENT: Time COST: 5 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4 | 4 TEXT: Go a little Past: Put "Beginner Time Traveler" in your hand.

ART: CarlosCai IDEA: CarlosCai NOTES: No upgraded version can be used to increase the number of cards in your deck, but can die easily, and would be 2 rounds until you can reuse. The enhanced version is cheaper but weaker, and can only return to your hand to prevent deaths by poisoning, light attack and something else, is why is "beginner", but can be reused immediately. It's my first post, and my first card. I'm not good with art. My native language is Spanish. SERIES:

[Hyroen]

Nice idea CarlosCai though I think it's been done before.

Aside, I wanted to mention that if the art was completely done by you congrats, it's pretty good.

Y si quieres hablar en español, puedes cuando quieras, solo manda me un mensaje personal. ^_^

[ZephyrPhantom]

Welcome to CI&A! We also have a Spanish thread in here: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/board,57.0.html  I think your art is really good!

Anyway, time to whip out the handy balancing formula.
Creature Cost = Attack + HP + Ability Value + Bonuses
Unupped
Attack: +4
HP: +1 (6-7 HP)
Ability Threat: +2 (Clears status effects but the creatures slightly expensive)
Bonuses? No.
Final Cost: 7 
Upped
Attack: +4
HP: +0 (1-5 HP)
Ability Threat: +3 (Ability now free)
Bonuses? -1/-2 for upgrade.
Final Cost: 6  /5 

Interesting Card, it makes a good mid-hitter for Time too.  I suggest changing the ability's name to "Time Warp" or "Time Travel" though.

[CarlosCai]

Thank you both.

Zblader, that the formula is something of yours? that's good.
So according to that, the price they got (random) are well?

I'll try to make decent art, and will change the name of the ability to "time travel ".
I did not know what to name because I'm not very good with English.

Soon I'll post some more cards

Thanks again.
Att. Carlos

EDIT: Can you tell me more about your cost formula? I'm thinking about a creature of high HP as a Armagio.

[rohlfo]

Anyway, time to whip out the handy balancing formula.
Creature Cost = Attack + HP + Ability Value + Bonuses
Unupped
Attack: +4
HP: +1 (6-7 HP)
Ability Threat: +2 (Clears status effects but the creatures slightly expensive)
Bonuses? No.
Final Cost: 7 
Upped
Attack: +4
HP: +0 (1-5 HP)
Ability Threat: +3 (Ability now free)
Bonuses? -1/-2 for upgrade.
Final Cost: 6  /5 

As much as I may agree with that, there might be a case for the ability threat to be 1 cheaper on both? unupped goes back on top of deck as payment for clearing status effects...upped has it better as goes into hand. I'm not saying it should be 1 cheaper, just think it could be (tricky to value things sometimes, espec when you think it feels like 1.5 value lol) - anyway, just my thought, otherwise a nice card, fits thematically and art looks great!