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Cat l Cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298051#msg298051
« on: March 25, 2011, 07:59:24 pm »
NAME:
cat
ELEMENT:
life
COST:
4  :life
TYPE:
creature
ATK|HP:
3|2
TEXT:
:air :air : jump the targeted creature gains -3 l -0
NAME:
cat
ELEMENT:
life
COST:
3  :life
TYPE:
creature
ATK|HP:
4 l 2
TEXT:
:air :air :  jump  the targeted creature -4 l -0
ART:
Emeraldtiger
IDEA:
kitty45
NOTES:
-jump is the cat jumping
- jump is in the air because it happens in the air
- Cat may not be the best kind of animal for this card,but it fits because cats always jump up to kill there prey

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***Insert series name and link to series page (if any)***
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298055#msg298055
« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2011, 08:03:31 pm »
2 things: they arent different, they are the same card and you need to put it in the card idea table
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298058#msg298058
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2011, 08:06:42 pm »
2 more things
u need :life :life to represent the 2 :life cost
the format is
:life :life : Meow
The cat gains +5 | +0 for a turn.

and the upgraded card needs to have "Upgraded" check box checked
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298064#msg298064
« Reply #3 on: March 25, 2011, 08:12:24 pm »
Please use the proper format  (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,5039.0.html) for cards.

Also use this version of the card maker for elemental icons : http://helltgivre.free.fr/elements/card_beta/

IMHO it feels sort of redudant - the ability looks like a really expensive dive, and it does quite a bit of damage for the cost.

Casting Cost should at least be 5 :life , and maybe the ability should be something different.
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298099#msg298099
« Reply #4 on: March 25, 2011, 08:44:07 pm »
I'm thinking of making the abilty  :air :air insted of  :aether
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298100#msg298100
« Reply #5 on: March 25, 2011, 08:47:42 pm »
again: format...

:aether :aether : Jump
Target creature gains -3 | -0

also, the summon cost is messed up, delete the X...

as for the balance, the unupped one is so UP, while the upped one is fine (could potentially be OP with fractal however)

additionally, first letter of the name should be capitalized
so, Cat | Cat
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298102#msg298102
« Reply #6 on: March 25, 2011, 08:52:35 pm »
well time to update again well I switched to air first time to do the rest
[/edit] Done
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298112#msg298112
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2011, 09:09:02 pm »
I see a period after "Cat", which is not needed..
also, change the thread name too
the two cards are the same again...

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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298163#msg298163
« Reply #8 on: March 25, 2011, 10:28:30 pm »
wouldnt it be better to just tell him whats incorrect in one post and not several?
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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298170#msg298170
« Reply #9 on: March 25, 2011, 10:35:02 pm »
Quote from: unit748596 on March 25, 2011, 10:28:30 pm
wouldnt it be better to just tell him whats incorrect in one post and not several?
Kitty made multiple changes and suggestions while TII was posting, so he pointed out new mistakes accordingly.

The name should probably be something more elements-ish. Maybe "Wildcat?"

Also would this image from Emeraldtiger work?

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Re: cat l cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298177#msg298177
« Reply #10 on: March 25, 2011, 10:45:35 pm »
Quote from: TheIdioticIdiot on March 25, 2011, 09:09:02 pm
I see a period after "Cat", which is not needed..
also, change the thread name too
the two cards are the same again...
Opps put the wrong one\

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Re: Cat l Cat https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=23399.msg298512#msg298512
« Reply #11 on: March 26, 2011, 12:51:56 pm »
Do you think this is ready for Crubile?
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