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Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg207824#msg207824
« on: November 23, 2010, 07:06:43 pm »
NAME:
Benefit Carrier
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
2 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|2
TEXT:
:light :light : Cure
Heals is owner up to 4 hp. Airborne.
NAME:
Miracle Carrier
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
2 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
0|2
TEXT:
:light: Cure
Heals is owner up to 4 hp. Airborne.
ART:
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IDEA:
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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg207945#msg207945
« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 10:00:53 pm »
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Increase picture size according to instructions I posted on your Thaw card.

This is the diamond in the rough! Great card!
I think this is balanced. Even if it is not balanced changing the HP heals by +/- 1 would be sufficient to balance it.
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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg208766#msg208766
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2010, 12:03:02 am »
I think that it heals a little bit too small. Maybe 5 HP.
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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg208771#msg208771
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2010, 12:06:34 am »
Guys, look at the card text. It actually says its airborne. I love you dylanthebest.

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg208785#msg208785
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2010, 12:17:10 am »
Well, I still think it should heal 5 HP.
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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg208847#msg208847
« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2010, 02:07:53 am »
Guys, look at the card text. It actually says its airborne. I love you dylanthebest.
:-\ me not understand

Well, I still think it should heal 5 HP.
Yeah, maybe (don't forget about the best friend of every card creator, fractal, and his ability to make cards OP), as it doesn't attack...

I personally like the idea, and I think airborne should go in the "notes", not in the text :P

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209066#msg209066
« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2010, 07:39:25 am »
Yup, that's true because it is a passive skill. If it was active you could put it in the text like the cure effect.
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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209170#msg209170
« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2010, 01:09:14 pm »
Guys, look at the card text. It actually says its airborne. I love you dylanthebest.
:-\ me not understand

Well, I still think it should heal 5 HP.
Yeah, maybe (don't forget about the best friend of every card creator, fractal, and his ability to make cards OP), as it doesn't attack...

I personally like the idea, and I think airborne should go in the "notes", not in the text :P
I made heal to 4 thinking that 5 will be overpowered with fractal...About airborne,some cards have the passive skill in the text...(vampire voodoo doll)...however it is not very important now...

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209244#msg209244
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2010, 03:16:15 pm »
I personally like the idea, and I think airborne should go in the "notes", not in the text :P
I am (seemingly the only person) of the opinion that all card details should be in the text. It would prevent every bit of confusion a new player could possibly have.

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209251#msg209251
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2010, 03:33:44 pm »
I made heal to 4 thinking that 5 will be overpowered with fractal...About airborne,some cards have the passive skill in the text...(vampire voodoo doll)...however it is not very important now...
Yeah, but those skills aren't passive (yep, IDK why, but if it can be lobo'd, it's not passive, is auto-cast active)... As you say, not a big deal, but once submitted to crucible (if you do) take that into account.

I am (seemingly the only person) of the opinion that all card details should be in the text. It would prevent every bit of confusion a new player could possibly have.
It could be true, IDK Zanz' reasons to do that, but it's the law :P

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209392#msg209392
« Reply #10 on: November 25, 2010, 08:22:48 pm »
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-Fix the discrepancy between your card text and the table's TEXT section for both cards: "Heals is owner up to 4 hp. Airborne." (The highlighted word needs to be 'His', to match the card image's text)


Simple, but semi-expensive if used over a long term. It's obviously not a good attacker unless you buff it though, so it does have some interesting uses. 4 HP doesn't sound like much, but I think this would add up if you combine it with SoGs, Anti-matter, etc....

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Re: Benefit Carrier | Miracle Carrier https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=16232.msg209404#msg209404
« Reply #11 on: November 25, 2010, 08:53:19 pm »
Out of curiosity, howsabout :light: Heal the owner for 1hp but make it repeatable like Photosynthesis?

 

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