Beam | Laser

[skyironsword]

NAME: Beam ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 3 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Target is delayed for X turns, where X is its attack.	NAME: Laser ELEMENT: Gravity COST: 2 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: TEXT: Target is delayed for X turns, where X is its health.

ART: IDEA: skyironsword NOTES: 0 attack creatures will not be delayed. Upped will not delay spark. SERIES:

[GamerJL]

good and epic idea but the title does not connect to its effect for me

[skyironsword]

You shoot a laser at them, they go flying and get a concussion. Good enough for you?

[GamerJL]

You shoot a laser at them, they go flying and get a concussion. Good enough for you?

laser dont do that lmao.... they turn to dust or get incinerated

[furballdn]

You shoot a laser at them, they go flying and get a concussion. Good enough for you?

laser dont do that lmao.... they turn to dust or get incinerated

Indeed, I have a hard time imagining a laser knocking something flying. The name could definitely change. Work on the thematics of it.

Also compare:

[skyironsword]

Actually, I compared it exactly to that. I wanted to make the cost 2|1, but I figured the upped would be strong enough considering delaying gravity for 20+ turns.

You shoot a laser at them, they go flying and get a concussion. Good enough for you?

laser dont do that lmao.... they turn to dust or get incinerated

Go read Artemis Fowl.

[Brontos]

Add "stun" to the name and I like it. :p
Stun Ray, Stun Laser, Stun Beam = more ok with the effect.
Laser doesn't delay/stun/slow in popular minds, it burns.

[timetock]

maybe something like "turn around"
the idea is that the more HP they have, the less easy it is for a creature to turn in another direction.

[skyironsword]

But unupped deals with attack.

[GamerJL]

Add "stun" to the name and I like it. :p
Stun Ray, Stun Laser, Stun Beam = more ok with the effect.
Laser doesn't delay/stun/slow in popular minds, it burns.

more examples that are LOGICAL :
Jam
Immobilize
ensnare

[skyironsword]

... Go read Artemis Fowl!! The Neutrino weapons have a setting for lasers that throw people back.

[CuCN]

Artemis Fowl is fiction.