Apocalypse | Doomsday

[harry959]

You got this idea from Yu-gi-oh.

[EvaRia]

This is what I think:
Scrap the instawin idea.
Make it an elemental card, probably fire, darkness, or death.
Make it cost less and drain all quanta.
Make the wait much, MUCH less, maybe about 3 turns.
CHANGE THE EFFECT OF THE CARD TO DESTROY ALL CREATURES ON THE FIELD.

There, a recycled name and art with a much more usable effect that isn't quite so gamebreaking, while still keeping the spirit of the card.

Also, for the upgraded name I prefer Ragnarok, but that might just be me.

[tyranim]

this screams yugioh. there is a card almost exactly like it in yugioh. instead of dealing damage, you win with that card though.

[the Sage]

This is what I think:
Scrap the instawin idea.
Make it an elemental card, probably fire, darkness, or death.
Make it cost less and drain all quanta.
Make the wait much, MUCH less, maybe about 3 turns.

I posted my variant here a while ago:
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,11365.msg149675#msg149675