The Snake| The Snake

[az4rel]

NAME: The Snake ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 4  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 3|6 TEXT:    temptation: Add a Strange Fruit to your enemy's hand, and heal you 5 Hps if it is used or discarded.	NAME: The Snake ELEMENT: Darkness COST: 4  TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 0|8 TEXT: temptation: Add a Strange Fruit to your enemy's hand, and heal you 5 Hps if it is used or discarded.

NAME: Strange Fruit ELEMENT: Entropy COST: TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: - TEXT: Random damage to your opponent or buff to all "The Snake". This card goes to your enemies hand if discarded.

ART: az4rel IDEA: az4rel NOTES: the myth is obvious. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serpent_%28Bible%29 60% chance for a buff to be casted, 40% for a damaging spell. unless there are no "The Snake"s on field. witch will cause 100% chance for damage. buffs rage potion, chaos power, blessing and heavy armor 25% chance each. damage 5-20 hp's(60%) or 3 poison(40%). Strange Fruit is not an stand alone card.

[Wonder]

"Cast random spell on enemy or on The Snake.
goes to enemy hand if discarded, casting holy light."

This is a bit confusing.

Maybe reword it, "Cast a random spell to your opponent or on The Snake. This card goes to your enemies hand if discarded, casting Holy Light."

Another thing, does Holy Light get casted on your opponent or to you?

[kitty45]

"Cast random spell on enemy or on The Snake.
goes to enemy hand if discarded, casting holy light."

This is a bit confusing.

Maybe reword it, "Cast a random spell to your opponent or on The Snake. This card goes to your enemies hand if discarded, casting Holy Light."

Another thing, does Holy Light get casted on your opponent or to you?

agreed ( off topic how can   I put a card picture on?)

[az4rel]

"Cast random spell on enemy or on The Snake.
goes to enemy hand if discarded, casting holy light."

This is a bit confusing.

Maybe reword it, "Cast a random spell to your opponent or on The Snake. This card goes to your enemies hand if discarded, casting Holy Light."

Another thing, does Holy Light get casted on your opponent or to you?

the part of casting holy light on your self didn't fit on the card so now the snake does the healing.
and I fixed some other things too.

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Fix the discrepancies in the TEXT between the table and the card image (have it so that the image and TEXT in the table are the same - if you don't want to fix the card description, reword the table accordingly):

Instead of:
"    temptation: Add a Strange Fruit to your enemy's hand, and heal you 5 Hps if it is used or discarded."

...it should be:

" Temptation:
add a strange fruit, to your opponent's hand."

[TheIdioticIdiot]

wait... 5 hp per snake on the field when it's used?

[az4rel]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Fix the discrepancies in the TEXT between the table and the card image (have it so that the image and TEXT in the table are the same - if you don't want to fix the card description, reword the table accordingly):

Instead of:
"    temptation: Add a Strange Fruit to your enemy's hand, and heal you 5 Hps if it is used or discarded."

...it should be:

" Temptation:
add a strange fruit, to your opponent's hand."

I changed the image. a while ago, maybe it is on your cache.

wait... 5 hp per snake on the field when it's used?

is it too op?
i could make it non-stackable.
or it could heal both players.

[Kuroaitou]

I changed the image. a while ago, maybe it is on your cache.

Complete fail on my part. >_< Sorry about that.

[Kuroaitou]

NOTE: I realized that while the 'reference' is 'obvious', for those users who may not be so inclined to what mythology this is based on, you should and must add a link to your NOTES section as soon as possible. Sorry for double posting, but I figure you should get that done before the voting starts.