Shard | Shard of Salubrity

[karis]

(http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=11117.0;attach=1672;image)
NAME: Shard ELEMENT: Other COST: 1 TYPE: Spell ATK|HP: ABILITY: It looks like a crystal shard. It seems to be useless, but it might be upgradable.	NAME: Shard of Salubrity ELEMENT: Other COST: 4 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: ABILITY: Your creature can't lose AT or HP for 1 turn.

ART: um...    Zanz?   or Elementsthegame? IDEA: karis NOTES: your creature can't take any dmg for 1 turn. it can increase with some buff  but can't decrease no matter what. if you use rage elixir on it    it will take only +6 at but not -6hp.     or even you use mutation to phoenix (but i'm don't think will have anyone do it...)   it will have 7|1 or whatever but can't less than that. SERIES: Shard of Madness? (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,11099.0.html)

[karis]

bumb...   

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
To get this card approved for the competition:
-Please add a table for the non-upgraded card version, including the table and picture - use the picture provided in this post (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,11117.msg146542#msg146542) in case you're too lazy to make an un-upped shard image of your own
-For the 'Type', it should be Permanent (there is no plural form in this section)
-Leave the ATK|HP value section blank if the card is not a creature (do not place things such as "None" and "N/A" in that part)
-For your description, try rewording it to make it flow easier:
"You and your creatures can't lose attack or HP for 2 turns." (this phrase has correct spelling and grammar, and fixes the issues in your upgraded card text in regards to pluralism and parallelism)


Personally, this card idea feels a little unfinished on several levels. Salubrity refers to the promotion of health, but I would never expect to grant an 'I win' button - it's somewhat overpowered, as playing multiples of these in a deck will make it impossible for you or your creatures to lose health (see Phase Shield + Sundial chaining for details). If you're going to keep the mechanic, perhaps you should raise the cost a little bit higher than 4.

[karis]

what about i'm change it into 1 turn?

[pwnzor99]

this seems a little op... a phase shield for your entire field except perms?

[karis]

ah...  fixed it.

sorry for a bit late.....   

[Kuroaitou]

ah...  fixed it.

sorry for a bit late.....   

CURATOR COMMENT
-Add a period to the non-upped Ability description to have it match your image card text

It's okay if it's late. Late is better than never in this case.

[karis]

eh....   are that not match?

cost 1 other and spell type?   

[Kuroaitou]

eh....   are that not match?

cost 1 other and spell type?

No, those are okay. ^^;;


Here: first, look at your non-upped card image text. Now look at your Ability description in your table for the non-upped card image. Now back at your non-upped card image text. Now back at your Ability description in your non-upped table. Sadly, you're still missing the 'period' after the word 'upgradable' in your Ability description.

[karis]

i'm can't find it...  really   

upgradable is the last word in description is not it?   

[Kuroaitou]

i'm can't find it...  really   

upgradable is the last word in description is not it?

You got it actually. XD lol

CURATOR COMMENT
This Card is Crucible Approved for the Shard Madness! Competition.
Edits of this card after this post may Void Approval.