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Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg143622#msg143622
« on: August 21, 2010, 10:24:30 pm »
This is my shard idea.


i may try making a spell with this ability but thought id try the shard.
NAME:
Shard
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
1
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
It looks like a crystal shard. It seems to be useless, but it might be upgradable.
NAME:
Shard of Perserverance
ELEMENT:
Other
COST:
3
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
ABILITY:
Removes all poison from all of your creatures. Also adds a +3 purify counter to your HP.
ART:
Zanz + SG
IDEA:
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NOTES:
SERIES:
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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg143826#msg143826
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 06:42:21 am »
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To get this card approved for the competition:
-Fix the card image sizes to the correct resolution (around 282 x 436) - use the Direct Image Link if you're using an image uploading site for the code
-Remove the '@' symbol in the 'Element' section of the table
-Fix the 'Type' of the card (Artifact and '@ Other' aren't correct terms; in this case, use the word 'Spell' for both cases)
-Fix the discrepancies between the card text and the Ability description in your table (add the description for the upgraded card)

Seems pretty limited in use for a shard. Compare this to Shard of Readiness/Gratitude/Divinity - all three of those are generally useful regardless of the situation (unless you're facing against specific counters), but this card seems to be an anti-Death card against Plagues and Retroviruses. Perhaps you can adjust the ability as well to make it represent 'Perserverance' more?

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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg144565#msg144565
« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2010, 02:27:55 am »
i think i fixed everything.
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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg144617#msg144617
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2010, 04:09:06 am »
i think i fixed everything.
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(almost) ;)

-You need to have the 'Element' in the section of the table (Just place the word 'Other' in there)
-Try to fix the blurriness of your pictures*

* = If you have problems with trying to have a correctly sized, non-blurry picture of the card art, try uploading it onto this site (http://imageplay.net/) (select the 'no resize' option), and then use the Direct Image Link for the code in between the 'img' codes.

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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg144749#msg144749
« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 11:23:53 am »
i think i fixed everything.
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(almost) ;)

-You need to have the 'Element' in the section of the table (Just place the word 'Other' in there)
-Try to fix the blurriness of your pictures*

* = If you have problems with trying to have a correctly sized, non-blurry picture of the card art, try uploading it onto this site (http://imageplay.net/) (select the 'no resize' option), and then use the Direct Image Link for the code in between the 'img' codes.
Edited:all cleared up :D
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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg145326#msg145326
« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 04:06:22 am »
Edited:all cleared up :D
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-Fix the discrepancies between the card text and the Ability description in your table ("to your HP." is not found on the upgraded card image AND add the word 'it' to your non-upped Ability description (you're missing the word 'it' between 'but' and 'might').

Almost there, I know. ^^;

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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg145439#msg145439
« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2010, 10:29:49 am »
Edited:all cleared up :D
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-Fix the discrepancies between the card text and the Ability description in your table ("to your HP." is not found on the upgraded card image).

Almost there, I know. ^^;
*facepalms* thanks.. fixed.  :D
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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg145479#msg145479
« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2010, 12:32:56 pm »
*facepalms* thanks.. fixed.  :D
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-Forgot about the word "it" in the non-upped card Ability description table. >.< (See my previous post for details).


When this is fixed, I'll approve it... ^^;

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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg145625#msg145625
« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2010, 05:04:26 pm »
*facepalms* thanks.. fixed.  :D
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-Forgot about the word "it" in the non-upped card Ability description table. >.< (See my previous post for details).


When this is fixed, I'll approve it... ^^;

(P.S. - sorry about this)
nah its fine.. i understand it has to be pretty much perfect :P  all fixed now
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Re: Shard | Shard of Perseverance https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=11672.msg146232#msg146232
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2010, 02:18:21 pm »
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This Card is Crucible Approved for the Shard Madness! Competition.
Edits of this card after this post may Void Approval.

 

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