Killer Smoke | Killer Smoke

[TheCrazyMango]

NAME: Killer Smoke ELEMENT: Fire COST: 4 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT:   : Suffocate The target creature is put in stasis for a turn and has a 50% chance of being infected	NAME: Killer Smoke ELEMENT: Fire COST: 3 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT:   : Suffocate The target creature is put in stasis for a turn and has a 50% chance of being infected

ART: 9270984 IDEA: 9270984 NOTES: for the MASH-UP design competition SERIES: ***Insert series name and link to series page (if any)***

[Memorystick]

Egads, more CC for fire? O_o
I'd change the wording a bit, it seems... a little awkward. "Target creature is put in stasis for one turn with a 50% chance to be infected" might work better (poison is for the player, infection is for creatures)

Also, I think the ability would fit death better... maybe change the cost to 2 ?

I like the idea, though. I think it could open up synergies with time (combined with procrastination and scarabs), death (or rather, strengthen those synergies), gravity (again, helping get creatures into munching range and strengthening existing synergies), and life (combined with thorn carapace for lots of infection)

[kobisjeruk]

Also, I think the ability would fit death better... maybe change the cost to 2 ?

and change the name to Poison Gas amirite?
oh wait, that is an illegal name

[Memorystick]

Also, I think the ability would fit death better... maybe change the cost to 2 ?

and change the name to Poison Gas amirite?
oh wait, that is an illegal name

Lulz. Smoke can still be toxic, and is definitely deadly, hence my suggestion. Remember, the element's name is death, not poison

[Kuroaitou]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Add a icon after the card's COST in the table. (It needs to read '4 ', not '4', unless you're implying it uses generic quanta to play)
-Leave the ATK|HP section blank if the card is not a creature
-Add an image for the card if you can

[TheCrazyMango]

CURATOR COMMENT
-Add a icon after the card's COST in the table. (It needs to read '4 ', not '4', unless you're implying it uses generic quanta to play)
-Leave the ATK|HP section blank if the card is not a creature
-Add an image for the card if you can

i cant draw at all but im working on something in paint and i dont want to look for a picture, but i fixed the other problems.
im also goin to change the skill cost to  and edit the wording some

EDIT: added image