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Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148320#msg1148320
« on: July 30, 2014, 05:02:29 pm »
NAME:
Slave of Fire
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
3 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
6/4
TEXT:
Comes to play with 2 burn counters.
 :light :light : Exoneration: Turns to Freed Lover of Water.
NAME:
Slave of Fire
ELEMENT:
Fire
COST:
3 :fire
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
8/5
TEXT:
Comes to play with 2 burn counters.
 :light :light : Exoneration: Turns to Freed Lover of Water.

ART:
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IDEA:
jarozaoz
NOTES:
I writed my submission in 2 3 hours, because my card image builder doesnt want to redirect me to Card Idea post builder. :c
It was been worthfull imo.

Kinda typical damager. Totally too small cost of it, but its balanced by burn (DoT, something like poison) damage. ;)
When Slave of Fire with Burn turns into Freed Lover of Water (FLoW in shortcut) , their status is ressetted. That means they're like newly came to play creatures.
 Additionally, while transforming, Slave of Fire triggers death effects. Kindly like "Slave's body is still slaved, but he's purified soul is free. By cleansing powers of :light, Slave's soul is reborn and its back as new, freed creature."
SERIES:
Lover of Water, (again and again) occupied by Fire.
NAME:
Freed Lover of Water
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
5 :water
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4/6
TEXT:
Autocasts Purify for owner of card, when comes to play.
 :darkness :darkness : Soul Seizure:
Turns into Slave of Fire.
NAME:
Freed Lover of Water
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
5 :water
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5/8
TEXT:
Autocasts Purify for owner of card, when comes to play.
 :darkness :darkness : Soul Seizure:
Turns into Slave of Fire.

ART:
jarozaoz
IDEA:
jarozaoz
NOTES:
I writed my submission in 2 3 hours, because my card image builder doesnt want to redirect me to Card Idea post builder. :c
It was been worthfull imo.

Kinda typical not-that-much-for-dmg creature. This card gots higer cost than Slave, because autocasted Purify is VERY helpfull. Purify is always autocasted when Lover comes to play, then paying 2 :darkness for bigger damage and 2 :light for next purify counters is a very awesome combo. Poison lovers will cry after seeing Freed Lover. ;)

Im looking for your feedback.  ;D
SERIES:
Lover of Water, (again and again) occupied by Fire
« Last Edit: July 30, 2014, 06:27:34 pm by jarozaoz »
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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148355#msg1148355
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2014, 06:15:52 pm »
What are burn counters?
Are they the same as poison counters?
Would they be removed by Purify?

Just not sure about the autocast Purify still. You're using a lot of keywords that may seem simple at a glance but still should be defined since there have been different abilities that have used the keywords [burn counters, autocast] that have had different effects.

Aside from that and personal qualms with naming and formatting, the stats seem balanced.

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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148357#msg1148357
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2014, 06:18:29 pm »
When the fire card transforms, I feel it should purify itself.
If I'm reading the card right, the burn counters will still remain.

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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148359#msg1148359
« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2014, 06:21:12 pm »
When the fire card transforms, I feel it should purify itself.
If I'm reading the card right, the burn counters will still remain.

I agree with the self-purify.

And that brings up another question. Who is the target of the autocast Purify? The card or the owner?

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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148362#msg1148362
« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2014, 06:24:30 pm »

And that brings up another question. Who is the target of the autocast Purify? The card or the owner?

Target of autocasted (casted for free, when FLoW [Freed Lover of Water] comes to play) Purify is owner. When Slave of Fire (with burn counters, this same as poison, that means it can be purified) transforming into FLoW, their status is resetted.

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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148364#msg1148364
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2014, 06:32:16 pm »
I understand the creation of burn counters for the theme of Fire, but if it is literally the same mechanic as poison, I'd consider slightly tweaking how it works. Otherwise, just say poison counters.

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Re: Summer and Winter submission -By Jarozaoz - Slave of Fire & Freed Lover of Water https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=55189.msg1148370#msg1148370
« Reply #6 on: July 30, 2014, 06:37:24 pm »
I wanted to Burn damage additionally enlarge damage dealed to creatures with burn counters by 30%, but for now we can say - poison counters.
Its another idea thats needed to be discussed. xd
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