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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449655#msg449655
« Reply #72 on: January 16, 2012, 08:42:23 pm »
Maybe a floating castle to symbolize Animate Weapon?
Is this to be the focus of the background and what do you think the size of it should be?
I think so.
From the viewer's PoV, it should be slightly larger than DG herself.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449687#msg449687
« Reply #73 on: January 16, 2012, 09:53:42 pm »
Much nicer. It feels right, which is what counts in art.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449689#msg449689
« Reply #74 on: January 16, 2012, 09:58:57 pm »
Much nicer. It feels right, which is what counts in art.
Thanks! The help was much appreciated.

The problem I'm having right now is making the face look less plain. I'm still not sure what I should do with eyes.

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I think so.
From the viewer's PoV, it should be slightly larger than DG herself.
Is it supposed to be an entire castle?
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449693#msg449693
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449700#msg449700
« Reply #76 on: January 16, 2012, 10:24:15 pm »
I think so.
From the viewer's PoV, it should be slightly larger than DG herself.
Is it supposed to be an entire castle?
Not sure, it -could- be a floating castle ruin. I'd like to leave that up to your interpretation.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449789#msg449789
« Reply #77 on: January 17, 2012, 03:46:55 am »
I think this update includes the last thing I'm going to do for the character herself. Suggestions are still welcome, but I would like to begin on the BG soon.
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449794#msg449794
« Reply #78 on: January 17, 2012, 04:12:00 am »
This might sound silly, but could you give her back her long hair? I feel it'd add better to the 'grace' of the FG, while her current hairstyle makes me think 'war' a bit too much.





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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449865#msg449865
« Reply #79 on: January 17, 2012, 11:17:55 am »
Like this or more volume?

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449992#msg449992
« Reply #80 on: January 17, 2012, 10:38:43 pm »
Like this or more volume?

I'd say more volume especially on the sides (like in your original version prior to working on the hair).

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg450000#msg450000
« Reply #81 on: January 17, 2012, 10:56:17 pm »
How about this?

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg450001#msg450001
« Reply #82 on: January 17, 2012, 10:57:32 pm »
Looks good. :)

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg450017#msg450017
« Reply #83 on: January 18, 2012, 12:02:34 am »
What about if I draw broken buildings and castles like this floating in the BG?



Note: Still trying to get the positioning right so DG doesn't cover everything. Maybe I have to make her smaller while still keeping her as the focus of the piece?
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