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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448062#msg448062
« Reply #48 on: January 11, 2012, 10:14:08 pm »
Hmmm... interesting, but I'd like to see how srm's version develops.

Otherwise, just bumping this thread to say it looks good, keep it up. :)
Thanks! I'm sorry I haven't had much time to work on it lately :X School's been busy, but I'll definitely work on it this weekend :D
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448079#msg448079
« Reply #49 on: January 11, 2012, 10:41:38 pm »
Minor nitpick:
I can't tell because its very small, but it looks like she has her mouth open. I'd say it should be closed.
Also, i don't know if your painting on the face is final, but if it is, remember there would be shadows on the face because of the nose, chin and hair. Actually you should set a light point and add shadows to everything.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448184#msg448184
« Reply #50 on: January 12, 2012, 03:16:32 am »
Minor nitpick:
I can't tell because its very small, but it looks like she has her mouth open. I'd say it should be closed.
Also, i don't know if your painting on the face is final, but if it is, remember there would be shadows on the face because of the nose, chin and hair. Actually you should set a light point and add shadows to everything.
I was planning on finishing this with shadows more near the end. Also, the mouth is actually closed. Those are lips, but I guess because I drew them, I know that.

Thanks for the input :)
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448244#msg448244
« Reply #51 on: January 12, 2012, 05:57:09 am »
A little wider and "softer", without hard edges (black lines and stuff) and a more pale colour. Unless she's wearing makeup, the lips colour will... "melt" with her skin.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448469#msg448469
« Reply #52 on: January 12, 2012, 10:39:37 pm »
A little wider and "softer", without hard edges (black lines and stuff) and a more pale colour. Unless she's wearing makeup, the lips colour will... "melt" with her skin.
I agree that they should be a little wider, but I want her lips to hold that dark-red color.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg448472#msg448472
« Reply #53 on: January 12, 2012, 10:46:31 pm »
I agree that the lips should be wider, but I think the lips should be dark-red for now.

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449013#msg449013
« Reply #54 on: January 14, 2012, 05:08:16 pm »
I agree that the lips should be wider, but I think the lips should be dark-red for now.
Lips are wider and I held the dark-red color. Updated the picture, but still haven't had much time to work on it.

What do you think of the wings?
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449014#msg449014
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449018#msg449018
« Reply #56 on: January 14, 2012, 05:28:23 pm »
Just threw up a sketch I did in about ten minutes. Just trying to get some ideas out there to see if they gain any interest.

Color suggestions would be great for Project #9.
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449147#msg449147
« Reply #57 on: January 15, 2012, 02:35:02 am »
I agree that the lips should be wider, but I think the lips should be dark-red for now.
Lips are wider and I held the dark-red color. Updated the picture, but still haven't had much time to work on it.

What do you think of the wings?
Awesome, I like where it's headed.
Could I have a second version with white 'edge', light blue 'feathers', and light blue on the armor as well, if possible? I get the feeling that color scheme would also be pretty cool. (Sorry if I'm demanding too much. ^^; )

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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449214#msg449214
« Reply #58 on: January 15, 2012, 10:38:24 am »
Awesome, I like where it's headed.
Could I have a second version with white 'edge', light blue 'feathers', and light blue on the armor as well, if possible? I get the feeling that color scheme would also be pretty cool. (Sorry if I'm demanding too much. ^^; )
Of course! I don't mind at all, it's just would you rather me change the color scheme for the second one at the end or now so you can see what it might look like?
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Re: Shrink's Free Card Art https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=34112.msg449241#msg449241
« Reply #59 on: January 15, 2012, 01:47:04 pm »
Updated with swords :D

I had to do something with the armor color scheme, it was just too plain. What do you think?
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