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card border competition. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=20885.msg266220#msg266220
« on: February 07, 2011, 05:03:12 am »

would like some feedback and French fries please, ;D

edit: images used all belong to the game or forum, except for this:
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/283312
that was used on the drain life card, and belongs to SteveFE
and this:
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/923852
used on the rage card, and belongs to onlybrahma
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Re: card border competition. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=20885.msg266224#msg266224
« Reply #1 on: February 07, 2011, 05:09:31 am »
The art looks good and I like the use of the symbol but the text is hard to read. (and cards in the game are vertical)
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Re: card border competition. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=20885.msg266229#msg266229
« Reply #2 on: February 07, 2011, 05:18:01 am »
Quote from: OldTrees on February 07, 2011, 05:09:31 am
The art looks good and I like the use of the symbol but the text is hard to read. (and cards in the game are vertical)
yeah i know that why I'm doing the vertical ones to,lol
the horizontal was just a crazy idea, that i wanted to share.
but I will probably have to erase them by the end.
I'll change the text color or make it bigger. don't know, which would be better?
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Re: card border competition. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=20885.msg266234#msg266234
« Reply #3 on: February 07, 2011, 05:22:41 am »
The size of the text seems fine. It is the color/background interaction that makes it hard to read. (Also the white shadow for the Dark text is confusing)

The Gray Nymph's text is easier to read but it is still dark on dark in places.
Now that I think about it the Nymph's text style is fine.
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Re: card border competition. https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=20885.msg266239#msg266239
« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2011, 05:27:28 am »
Quote from: OldTrees on February 07, 2011, 05:22:41 am
The size of the text seems fine. It is the color/background interaction that makes it hard to read. (Also the white shadow for the Dark text is confusing)

The Gray Nymph's text is easier to read but it is still dark on dark in places.
Now that I think about it the Nymph's text style is fine.
ok ill remove the white and add some dark blue behind the text, if that is not enough I'll make the text gray.
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