change it to
4 Air Quanta
Deal one damage to all enemy creatures. Draw a card.
I personally think draw acceleration should only be reserved for

.
I like Essence's idea. Makes the card much more useful as a cc.
But then again, it overlaps with shockwave and shockwave's gonna become underused instead because there are only a few situations where it'll be preferred than the storm.
(ex - unuped cockatrice, upped shrieker... what else?
freeze + shockwave combo is useful but not common)