Forum Brawl #6 - Round 4 - Voting

[Vineroz]

Vine, for our bard task-- the entire thing is underwater. Perhaps we could've made it more clear, but did you expect jellyfish, coral, and seaweed to all live/grow on land? 

Yes I figured, but it is still weird to not see some graphical hint

Pyro: interesting new creature but no story

I thought this was the enchanter task, not the scribe one.

How is a vapour serpent a threat to your entire kingdom?
It's just a big serpent.
S7's tornado has a small bio underneath telling you about emergency measures taken to protect the kingdom from it from it, and a seige is very self-explanatory as to why that's a problem. (Although I'd like to know what they're getting seiged by.) It doesn't have to be close to as extreme as I did it, but some context would be loved.

This is Vineroz's complaint.

Espithel was right, one sentence or two to describe how it is causing trouble to your country is what I feel necessary.

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We used the scribe task for that, but i understand what you mean. To summarise, the vapour serpent turns water into vapour, which is what it lives and breathes in. The amount of water it vaporises isn't limited by much, so whole lakes and rivers can be carried away in the air.

Linkcat, i don't understand what you mean by switched. Why? How would that make it better?