Not that it's my business as I'm not a master, but that's not a card pool. Re-read the template application and there is a google docs where you can input that string of data and post a link to it here.
Alternatively just write down how many upgrades you have in each element, and how many of each rare, shards and nymphs and post it.
Applications are, imo, more appealing if they are readable
Welcome to the forums, good luck with your application, and good luck in war if you get picked. You stand a better chance of that if you post a legible card pool
