Between Classes

[AnonymousRevival]

Looks nice moomoose. Maybe the 'core' could be a bit brighter. Perhaps you could create a new layer and apply an 'incandescent' gradient on it, radially of course.

[moomoose]

how about more fire? lava golem.
or

[Chapuz]

How about... it looks great

[Rutarete]

How about... it looks great

^. Funny too. You're doing well, moo, keep up the great work!

[andretimpa]

Ok, that's awesome. It looks a little dark, so maybe it needs more brightness (or maybe that's just my display).

[artimies7]

It does look a bit dark to my eyes as well. Try adding some ambient glow from the lava.

And I concur. You're really doing well, cowmoose.

[vrt]

Needs a lot less contrast. Bring out some more shapes! I haven't worked on this in ages, but it should give you a good idea of what I mean ; http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c190/verticae/lg1_zps3ba834ef.png

[moomoose]

It actually was, but I liked the darker look, unfortunately I did too much work after the darkening to just undo it ><
Also, it has more shapes and whatnot on a larger scale, just when shrinking it down, that's all lost-

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im not sure how to add more shapes as described, aside from starting from scratch =/

[artimies7]

Naw, this new one is good. You accidentally posted the card three times, though.

EDIT: Unless, of course, those are three different versions. Didn't appear that way though.

[ddevans96]

They're three different versions. First one is lightened, second has the figure trimmed down, last is darkened a little bit. To me, the final one is perfect.

[moomoose]

i think ill go with the blue crawler next... just need to figure out how to position it and get the angles/proportions correct

[Rutarete]

i think ill go with the blue crawler next... just need to figure out how to position it and get the angles/proportions correct

I look forward to seeing that