[Round 1] Writer Task

[majofa]

~ DAWN OF THE SINGULARITY ~
During a game I played an entropy card,
It gave me a smile and seemed not too hard,
With ease I played another,
But soon I did discover,
playing too many of these will leave you scarred.

It should be done correctly now.

[Silver Emerald]

Not going to let me be lazy efficient about the colors, huh?

It's changed, hopefully more legible?

Also, may end up having that replace the current No. 1.

[majofa]

No, I just need a 5th row to my trophies! 

[JonathanCrazyJ]

I love the Steam Machine = Car idea, but don't really get the tears part. I though about how a Fire guy would power it, and who he'd call if he broke down. Roadside assistance mechanic perhaps?

Once a Fire guy went to the Bazaar.
Used his Steam Machine just like a car!
He had a Cremation,
But no creatures! Damnation!
Are mechanics flammable? They Are!

[Silver Emerald]

Initially the idea was the machine running out of 'steam' and him trying it to power it with his sadness...but not sure it was the best pun.

Thanks to all for the help along the way, the intended final draft is in the OP for me to send in the morning. Speak now or forever hold your silence!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Cool
I think if one has a title the other two should.
My suggestions would be 'Watching Where You Are Going' for precog and 'Burning Down the Highway'
I'd also have the precog one last, has the best punchline.
Good work this round, tough taskand you came up with some funny ideas

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Also, you don't  'send in' the finished thing, the brawlmasters will look at thd OP of this topic and take it from there, so make sure there is nothing in the OP you don't want submitted

[Silver Emerald]

Ah, whoops. Well, that's convenient!

Just under three hours remaining until the round is over; I've organized the OP to specify what is being submitted. I think we have a pretty strong opening bid for writing!