[Round 4] Artist

[Calambar]

[Calambar]

Well, when I look at round 3 submissions I know I was right, it is extremely difficult/impossible for me to beat Khali and andre. I know that whatever I draw/paint in the current  round 4 task, they will make it better. It's not that I don't believe in myself, I just objectively know my current art skills, experience and time constraints. I need to spend much time to make something which looks good/decent and even though I spent some hours on round 3 submission, I admit my design objectively looks worse than LoS' and Chasome's designs. Sorry for that, I did my best.

Landscapes are not what I'm comfortable with, I gonna be frank, I have never painted landscape before. I will try, but as I said I know that at least Khali and andre will do it better.

Having said that, maybe I should focus on originality rathar than on art itself to get some votes? Any ideas? Any help?

[kirbylover314]

It's fine Kryz ^^

As for ideas, originality is likely the way to go. You could go for an "ordinary day in Elements" scene, or a fighting scene, depending on what you might feel would be considered more original. (Personally, I've no clue.)

If you decide to go for a fight scene, you can put faint marks for where cards would go on the ground.

If you decide to go for the "ordinary day in Elements" scene, maybe a bunch of kids running with a Rustler, the Oracle under a tree watching them, in the distance a dragon flies.

[majofa]

Winning isn't getting 1st place in every task (cmon, this isn't Brawl #1  )... We just have to do well in all tasks and the points will add up.

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Majo summed it up perfectly. Plus you have won a task already... actually just checked standings, you are currently the highest scoring artist.

Not all tasks will suit everyone. When they don't, be original

[Calambar]

OP updated!

Ok, I tried to be original. Hope it's good.

Please someone proofread! If you think text can be changed for somethine better, I can still do it!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

HAHAHA I love it!

[Calambar]

Is script ok? Please someon proofread/edit it ASAP!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Entropy:
"That seems to be Discord's fault!" should be "That's probably Discord's fault". the 's after discord is important.
"Let's throw the dice what next" should be "let's throw the dice, what next?" the comma is important

last bit:
Ran, not Run.

other than that it's all good. I like "You captured poor moon!" lol

[Silver Emerald]

Excellent unconventional tactics!

Spoiler for Oh, and since you asked about proofreading:

Frame 1: Might change 'Maybe landscape' to 'Maybe a landscape'.
Frame 8 (): Most major issue, considering who we are: 'Blue Crawles' should read 'Blue Crawlers'.
Frame 12 (): As JCJ already mentioned, "Discord" should be followed by" 's " and "Let's throw the dice what next" should probably be a question with a comma.
Frame 18 (): Also as JCJ brought up, 'run' should probably be past-tense 'ran'.

[Calambar]

OP edited. Thanks for proofreading!