[Super Bonus Task] [Final Draft]

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Abyss Brawlers' manga comic in the spoiler below! Enjoy!

Spoiler for Abyss Brawlers presents: Manga comic - JCJ CI&A Master:

Spoiler for references:

badass boss - http://images.castcall.blue-compass.com.s3.amazonaws.com/portfolioraw/685/685001.jpg

water Japanese symbol - http://www.freetattoodesigns.org/images/japanese%20symbols/water.gif

sayaka - http://www.1999.co.jp/itbig23/10236810.jpg

sayaka2 - https://otakurepublic.com/media/binary/000/084/801/234592.jpg

submarine 1 - http://www.mindef.gov.sg/navy/careers/static/img/assets/v2/8a.png

sexy scuba divers - http://art.ngfiles.com/images/157000/157650_widecollar_scuba-girls.jpg

hand- http://fr.wikihow.com/dessiner-des-mains-fa%C3%A7on-manga#/Image:Draw-Anime-Hands-Step-34.jpg

coffeeditto - https://em-uploads.s3.amazonaws.com/avatars/431686_original.jpg

owl - http://quovx4d83tr2hp1r22mgwa1m.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/ori-owl.jpg

spy - https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/498206432462786560/cTBRJLjW_400x400.jpeg

budweiser - http://www.buckeyebbqfest.org/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/Budweiser-Logo-2015.png

frog- http://i.imgur.com/SYbq9iU.jpg

Backgrounds:

Submarine interior: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:INTERIOR_VIEW_OF_SUBMARINE_SECTION_AT_110-FOOT_LEVEL,_ESCAPE_TRAINING_TANK,_SHOWING_LADDER_TO_ESCAPE_TANK,_LOOKING_SOUTH_-_U.S._Naval_Submarine_Base,_New_London_Submarine_Escape_HAER_CONN,6-GROT,3A-16.tif?uselang=pl

submarine interior 2 - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Laika_ac_c-56_Submarine_interior_(6451205443).jpg

[Calambar]

Abyss Brawlers' manga comic in the spoiler below! Enjoy!

Spoiler for Abyss Brawlers presents: Manga comic - JCJ CI&A Master:

Spoiler for references:

badass boss - http://images.castcall.blue-compass.com.s3.amazonaws.com/portfolioraw/685/685001.jpg

water Japanese symbol - http://www.freetattoodesigns.org/images/japanese%20symbols/water.gif

sayaka - http://www.1999.co.jp/itbig23/10236810.jpg

sayaka2 - https://otakurepublic.com/media/binary/000/084/801/234592.jpg

submarine 1 - http://www.mindef.gov.sg/navy/careers/static/img/assets/v2/8a.png

sexy scuba divers - http://art.ngfiles.com/images/157000/157650_widecollar_scuba-girls.jpg

hand- http://fr.wikihow.com/dessiner-des-mains-fa%C3%A7on-manga#/Image:Draw-Anime-Hands-Step-34.jpg

coffeeditto - https://em-uploads.s3.amazonaws.com/avatars/431686_original.jpg

owl - http://quovx4d83tr2hp1r22mgwa1m.wpengine.netdna-cdn.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/ori-owl.jpg

spy - https://pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/498206432462786560/cTBRJLjW_400x400.jpeg

budweiser - http://www.buckeyebbqfest.org/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/Budweiser-Logo-2015.png

frog- http://i.imgur.com/SYbq9iU.jpg

Backgrounds:

Submarine interior: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:INTERIOR_VIEW_OF_SUBMARINE_SECTION_AT_110-FOOT_LEVEL,_ESCAPE_TRAINING_TANK,_SHOWING_LADDER_TO_ESCAPE_TANK,_LOOKING_SOUTH_-_U.S._Naval_Submarine_Base,_New_London_Submarine_Escape_HAER_CONN,6-GROT,3A-16.tif?uselang=pl

submarine interior 2 - https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Laika_ac_c-56_Submarine_interior_(6451205443).jpg

Current progress:

Spoiler for Hidden:

Spoiler for JCJ:

Spoiler for UTA:

Spoiler for mathman101:

Mathman is too shy to show his "face" so he is hiding in a cube ^^

Spoiler for russianspy:

Spoiler for Coffeeditto:

Spoiler for Original post:

Hello team!

Let's have a look at the task:
"It is supposed to be a co-operative task between every Role and teammate. Your task is to produce an Elements-themed manga, comic book or graphic novel."

Don't hesitate to group together now and make decisions and script because believe me, it's really time consuming and also remember:

"the tasks will get harder and more time-consuming as Brawl proceeds... so when you choose to make a start on this is up to you."

I also have RL and the earlier I start draw for that task the better! Remember that opponent artists are strong, so I need to make a high quality comic if we want to compete with them. But I need time for that, I'm still an amateur, really.

Fippe suggested Yu-Gi-Oh style of the comic, something like this: https://www.reddit.com/r/hearthstone/comments/3spmew/hearthstone_korean_comic_fully_translated_eng/

What do you guys think? Any at least rough ideas for possible script? Brainstorm hard team now! I beg you

PS. My initial suggestion is to make a nice cover in full color for sure. The rest can be monochrome. If I still find time to color it, I can do that later

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Idea 1: A journey style idea, where we fight our way through brief encounters with the other bosses/teams (just one or two frames per boss), and when we think we have beaten them all, a huge two headed ogre appears, the brawlmasters!
'Beating' bosses could simply be a zing-style pun or dis, in a sort of 'meme' form:
- "Gaia's Pride? More like Gaia DIED!" <Smash> <Pow> <Bam> etc.
- Have you seen memes where it's like

Spoiler for this:

Well, Physsion, Physsioff.
- Fiery-Hot Mixtape, Even the BMs know you're useless. <insert>

Spoiler for this:

http://elementscommunity.org/forum/brawl-auction/auction-process-(brawl-5)/msg1224126/#msg1224126

- I don't really see A Toadally Newtral Team as a threat. I mean, your deck choice isn't great. (build deck exclusively out of neutral 'other' cards.)
-Make a card for Chaosomes, possibly an effect like "Chaosomes creates a Brawl team of players with a random amount of Chromosomes." (some people may not get this joke, but imo the ones that do will enjoy it )

[kirbylover314]

You mean something like this?

[JonathanCrazyJ]

nah, it's a different type of meme, more like this:

[Calambar]

Fist of all, boss, can you make this topic sticky as it lasts for all Brawl? It would be moce convenient not to search for ir among other topics.

Secondly, I'm not really happy with making fun of actual Brawlers, epecially your example:

nah, it's a different type of meme, more like this:

is quite cruel for me and sorry for saying this, but for me it's pretty primitive humor. Maybe I'm just an old grumpy guy, I don't know

Instead of making fun of Brawlers, what about focus on making a parody of Elements itself, its mechanic, bugs, creatures etc and making fun of Manga style itself? Exaggerate some of its distinctive features (for example making even bigger eyes than it is usually used in this style, I don't know).

What do you guys think? Please think fast!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

I can't make it a sticky but I will ask Clean or Nae when I next see one of them.

I am ok with dropping my idea, though I'll be really, really sad if we drop "Chaosomes creates a Brawl team of players with a random amount of Chromosomes." Clean0nion actually PMed me having seen it in my post saying "Holy fucking shit, Please include that" so I know it's funny to at least some people haha.

on/off memes are quite prevalent, but I don't mind dropping it. I might put it in propaganda at some point of something.

I'll have a think about ways of parodying elements if I have time after finishing my task this week, because at the end of the day you'll be doing most of the art so it should be something you are most comfortable with

[Calambar]

Ok, we can reconsider your idea boss, but I would like all team to brainstorm and create READY script ASAP if we want good quality comic, because it will take me much time. This is all team task, not only JCJ and mine so I call all team to join and discuss possible ways of completing this task.

[Silver Emerald]

As your lawyer writer, I advise that we mutually pick a time within the next 36 hours that most (ideally all) the team can get together to discuss this.

[Calambar]

As your lawyer writer, I advise that we mutually pick a time within the next 36 hours that most (ideally all) the team can get together to discuss this.

I assume it will be extremely difficult, my time here varies unfortunately. In this week I'm here from 6am to 2pm GMT+1. But actually I'm not sure about tomorrow. I will update that later.

Boss, how to present your idea with memes in the attractive form of a comic? Memes are static, don't we need some action?

EDIT: First drafts of our main character (hopefully?), badass JCJ:

Spoiler for Hidden:

Do you accept the face boss?

PS. I don't like wasting free time when I have it

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Ahahahaha awesome... any way to make me a bit fishy? like add gills and a fin like a fish-man?

[kirbylover314]

Krzy that's amazing :O