[Super Bonus Task] [Final Draft]

[Calambar]

Is it ok boss? Character accepted?

Spoiler for Hidden:

[JonathanCrazyJ]

It's awesome!
You're awesome

[Calambar]

Ok team, this is my suggestion what can be included in the script.

As our boss is a scuba diver, using Flooding in one match is a must IMO! So everything will be underwater and our boss will just swim in it. Maybe against Gaia which will use mitosis deck?

I would also like to include all spells in other matches + shard of patience and another must we need to use Blue Crawler in one match.

In general, somehow our boss always knows what deck he should use. In the end, after defeating all teams, while CleanOnion is about to give us a medal, Naesala comes and it turnes out she learnt JCJ bribed oracle so he knew which decks his opponent would use. How he bribed oracle? He "produced" a harem of nymphs with Nymhp's Tearms or better thanks to our Chica In the end, angry teams rage at JCJ and the REAL brawl begins

I don't know how to connect my idea with JCJ's idea and how to make it funny, it's a job for all of us now. What do you think about it, team?

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Cool, that works, I'll try to work on a script later this week or early next week

[Calambar]

Suggestion for general comic context: JCJ challenges all bosses to Elements fights.

Two new characters:

Spoiler for UTA and mathman101:

Mathman is too shy to show his "face" so he is hiding in a cube ^^

[Calambar]

Two new characters, russianspy and coffeeditto! I had coffeeditto already drawn in previous comics.

What about JCJ after defeating coffeeditto take him into pokeball?

I have also suggestion for Gaia's Pride. Discord could fight on behalf of dawn to dusk because:

-excerpt of possible script: [commentator]: "The boss of Gaia's Pride cannot come because... he is only available from dawn to dusk... BTW there must be a girl in a good manga, so here we are, on behalf of Gaia's boss we welcome Discord!" (Of course this script needs to be edited in terms of grammar and stilistics).

Now drafts:

Spoiler for russianspy:

Spoiler for Coffeeditto:

I'm adding all art progress in the second post!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

you so good. Coffeeditto in black and white looks like he's from some bizzare pokemon gangster movie

[Calambar]

There's only 3 weeks to do this task. I'll be frank, I know it would be impossible for me to make a comic I expected. Even if I could focus only on this comic, it would be difficult to draw it completely. I hate rushing, but we have two options.

First option: I just make a first episode of the good-looking (hopefully) comic, manga comics consist of many episodes sometimes, am I right? I can create as much pages as possible (3, 4?) and when I say page, I mean A5 format. I can continue this comic after Brawl for Newsletter.

Second option: We make a short, but complete story and I draw it in a rush because regular Brawl tasks are also time consuming.

The fact is: "All teams who submit their Super Bonus Task will receive 10 points. Winner will receive 15 points!"

There's 10 points for mere submission and only 5 more for the winner. It's useless to focus on this task more than on regular tasks which can give us more points.

What are your opinions on this?

[JonathanCrazyJ]

I believe that is misworded and it's an additional 15 points for the winner. Normal bonus rounds are 5+5, this is 10+15.

Id lean on short but complete story. Will work on a plot later today or tomorrow, can you summarise the plotline ideas we have so far? In a little confused what you think it should be.

Honestly this bonus task makes it hard for the whole team to help :|

[Calambar]

The rough idea was you challenge all bosses for elements fights, it was supposed to be a Brawl challenge.

I wanted to depict the macthes in Yu-Gi-Oh style suggested by Fippe. I love the idea that's why I lean toward first option, making the first episode of high quality comic and continue it after Brawl. It was an insane expactation to make a full comic like that within that amount of time I have for that.

So if you want to have a short, but complete story, please include there all bosses as I already have them drawn. Maybe we should return to your initial idea of memes? But memes don't seem to be good for a comic...

[Fippe94]

Random idea that includes everything:

JCJ decides to defeat all other bosses in duels. He arrives at the place where one of the bosses are supposed to be, but it turns out *all* bosses are, there waiting for him. Naturally, JCJ has to fight them all in an 1-vs-5 Elements duel. He quickly gets overwhelmed, but then he "believes in the heart of the cards" (or something just as cheesy), and then draws a super-mega-OP card/combo (i.e. a new card), which then in some way defeats all of them at once.

Thoughts about that?

[JonathanCrazyJ]

I like that, it's simple, but not as boring as simply having 5 fights in a row. Just needs a good twist card...