[Round 3] Artist

[Calambar]

In addition, I made an animated loading screen.

I wanted to make a gif, but it resulted in drastic loss of quality.

Instead, I made a screen caption directly from the software:
CLICK TO SEE THE VIDEO OF THE LOADING SCREEN

I also made another video presenting the idea of changing elements marks. Normally, it would be supposed to change over all 12 elements, but it is enough to show you just two to present the idea.

CLICK TO SEE THE VIDEO OF CHANGING ELEMENTS MARKS

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Oh that's PRETTY!

[Calambar]

I'm not actually satisfied with the background, do you really like it JCJ? I'm not sure people would like it, maybe some. On the other hand ir represents all 12 elements.

Fippe says it looks unprofessional. I would love to hear the feedback from others and ideas how to improve it.

[JonathanCrazyJ]

yeah i do get the point that it looks a bit tacky.
What about if the colours were just in a band across the screen behind the elements logo, with the rest being the more recognised background, keeping the changing mark?

[Calambar]

Three new versions:

Spoiler for ver. 1:

Spoiler for ver. 2:

Spoiler for ver.3:

My fav now is version 3, while JCJ prefers ver.2. Maybe others like ver.1 more? Please, feedback is needed!

[Silver Emerald]

It's a little hard to decide; I like all of them in different regards.

Would probably say 1 since the title looks inset on that one, though if there's anything you can do the soften the jaggedness on the left edge of the element color section (and this holds for both the right and left edges on the other two) it would probably look more natural.

[kirbylover314]

I like v3 better since it's softer on the eyes, I think, but I like how v2 has "Elements" set into the colours.

I don't like the font of the design though.

[Calambar]

Ok guys, I can see when it comes to art (and probably when it comes to everything) you can't really satisfy all. I made another version without jagged rainbow and present it to you with version 3 from my last post. I recorded changing marks of these two versions (but gonna upload it to youtube at work because I have really slow net at home).

Please vote between two versions presesnted in this post. Unfortunately, I don't have time for further modifying so I hope it's not horrible.

Spoiler for ver 1:

Spoiler for ver 2:

Please vote!

[JonathanCrazyJ]

personally prefer jagged. the straight lines make the other one look a bit simple, something about the jagged lined one makes it look interesting to me

[Fippe94]

Personally I prefer ver 2, the straight edges.

[JonathanCrazyJ]

Actually after looking again I think the straight is probably better

[Silver Emerald]

I'd tend to say Version 2.

I don't know, there's just something that bothers me about the uneven spikes on the left in the jagged version. Other than that, I like it as well.