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Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276928#msg276928
« on: February 23, 2011, 07:56:17 am »
NAME:
Wadjet
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
4 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 2
TEXT:
:death :death : Corrosive Venom
Fully destroys the target permanent in 2 turns.
NAME:
Wadjet
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
4 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5 | 2
TEXT:
:death :death : Corrosive Venom
Fully destroys the target permanent in 2 turns.
ART:
Art by Krava!
IDEA:
Jappert, to compete in the Mythology card competition.
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,21598.0.html
NOTES:
- Wadjet is part of Egyptian Mythology, that's why it's a Time Card.
- Wadjet is known for it's poisonous abilities (it's the snake head on alot of pharaoh masks)
- Unique kind of PC, cause the time element doesn't have any yet.
- Medium Hitter for time.
- Combines two Elements (could also change skill to Life element?)

Info:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wadjet
SERIES:
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,21598.0.html
Corrosive Acid destroys a permenent in 2 turns, meaning the opponent still has the chance to use it for two turns (like he can still use his Pulverizer to destroy 1-2 of your permanents). In the long term though, this is a great addition to stalling and the creature itself can deal some damage aswell.

Feedback is welcomed.

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276971#msg276971
« Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 11:50:13 am »
You've posted this in the wrong area. I'd suggest you go back to the competition and read the rules so you know the proper place to post this.
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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276973#msg276973
« Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 11:55:38 am »
You've posted this in the wrong area. I'd suggest you go back to the competition and read the rules so you know the proper place to post this.
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Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276974#msg276974
« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 11:56:34 am »
NAME:
Wadjet
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
4 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 2
TEXT:
:death :death : Corrosive Venom
Fully destroys the target permanent in 2 turns.
NAME:
Wadjet
ELEMENT:
Time
COST:
4 :time
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5 | 2
TEXT:
:death :death : Corrosive Venom
Fully destroys the target permanent in 2 turns.
ART:
Art by Krava!
IDEA:
Jappert, to compete in the Mythology card competition.
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,21598.0.html
NOTES:
- Wadjet is part of Egyptian Mythology, that's why it's a Time Card.
- Wadjet is known for it's poisonous abilities (it's the snake head on alot of pharaoh masks)
- Unique kind of PC, cause the time element doesn't have any yet.
- Medium Hitter for time.
- Combines two Elements (could also change skill to Life element?)

Info:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wadjet
SERIES:
http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,21598.0.html
Corrosive Acid destroys a permenent in 2 turns, meaning the opponent still has the chance to use it for two turns (like he can still use his Pulverizer to destroy 1-2 of your permanents). In the long term though, this is a great addition to stalling and the creature itself can deal some damage aswell.

Feedback is welcomed.

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276977#msg276977
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 12:09:39 pm »
It's a very good idea, but way too cheap. 3 :time for a 5 attack creature? And with a good ability? It definitely needs a casting cost raise of 3 or more for upped and unupped, in my opinion.
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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg276981#msg276981
« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 12:27:27 pm »
It's a very good idea, but way too cheap. 3 :time for a 5 attack creature? And with a good ability? It definitely needs a casting cost raise of 3 or more for upped and unupped, in my opinion.
Yeah I kinda started from the arctic squid point of view, but then PC instead of CC. I may have upped the damage a bit to much because I wanted a mid hitter for time aswell.
I tweaked it a little, both the ability and the card cost are increased. It's still got a decent attack/cost when upped (5 damage for 4 cost) and ofc a very useable ability. The skill is still off-element and not of a combination we'd see alot ( :time / :death)

Judging your previous post I think you have the feeling it should be nerfed even further? Let's wait what others think aswell, also thanks alot for the feedback!

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg281840#msg281840
« Reply #6 on: March 02, 2011, 07:37:49 pm »
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I remember making a similar card-duo (in regards to the elements, not the mechanics), and :death - :time combos are often overlooked. It's a nice form of PC, but I wouldn't exactly 'classify' it as soft, since the permanent is destroyed (Shockwave + Frozen Weapon, Explosion, EQ, Steal) rather than disabled (Frozen/Delay status on Voodoo). If anything, it's more of DoT (destruction over time) effect for permanent control, which could be equivalent to the time it takes to summon, say, a Pulverizer and destroy something.

Liking it, and I can't wait to see your idea finalized. :)

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg281848#msg281848
« Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 08:01:56 pm »
Thanks for the comment Kuro!

I'd still like some more feedback myself, not alot of people have replied.
I'm quite satisfied with the result as it is and think this could be a unique card.

Thanks alot Krava for the awesome art! You have a really nice and unique art style.

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg281861#msg281861
« Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 08:10:27 pm »
This card seems balanced, if a bit weak.  2 turns maybe a bit long.  A flying pulvy isn't that great most of the time and has an instant version of this effect.  Then again, you could run 6 of these for an eventualy lockdown, and :time has the stalling capacities to make this happen.

Overall I love the idea and a great way to introduce PC to :time

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg283329#msg283329
« Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 09:26:19 pm »
Thanks alot Krava for the awesome art! You have a really nice and unique art style.
Ah yes... very smexy art indeed. :D Your idea has been approved now Jappert!

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg288854#msg288854
« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2011, 04:15:30 pm »
so it destroys all stacks of bonewall?

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Re: Wadjet | Wadjet https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=21628.msg288876#msg288876
« Reply #11 on: March 12, 2011, 04:35:02 pm »
so it destroys all stacks of bonewall?
Only one obviously, just as other PC does. That's one of bonewalls strengths.

 

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