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Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016093#msg1016093
« on: November 16, 2012, 08:59:43 pm »
NAME:
Raising Charger
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
5 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 4
TEXT:
0 Rise: Gain Airborne, +2 attack and momentum. Fall.
NAME:
Flying Charger
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
4 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 4
TEXT:
0 Rise: Gain Airborne, +2 attack and momentum. Fall.

ART:
Shadow303
IDEA:
Rutarete
NOTES:
It's a steadily growing creature.
Fall is the second half of the ability in which the creature loses Airborne and momentum.
SERIES:




Spoiler for previous version:
NAME:
Raising Charger
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
5 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 4
TEXT:
Bounce: Gain Airborne, lose momentum and 2 attack. Next turn, gain 4 attack and momentum, lose Airborne.
NAME:
Flying Charger
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
4 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 4
TEXT:
Bounce: Gain Airborne, lose momentum and 2 attack. Next turn, gain 4 attack and momentum, lose Airborne.

ART:
Will you make art for this?
IDEA:
Rutarete
NOTES:
It's a steadily growing creature. The wording is awkward, I know. Any suggestions for it?
SERIES:

« Last Edit: December 16, 2012, 06:13:28 pm by Rutarete »
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016493#msg1016493
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2012, 06:18:16 am »
Bump to signify new wording. Feedback?
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016494#msg1016494
« Reply #2 on: November 19, 2012, 06:20:27 am »
Cost line should read:
0 : Rise
[Ability Here]

Add that comma after "attack."  You are creating two individual fragments as opposed to a list...

Aside from my grammatical issues, it SHOULD be fine.
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016497#msg1016497
« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2012, 06:25:12 am »
Quote from: Drake_XIV on November 19, 2012, 06:20:27 am
Cost line should read:
0 : Rise
[Ability Here]

Add that comma after "attack."  You are creating two individual fragments as opposed to a list...

Aside from my grammatical issues, it SHOULD be fine.
It's grammatically fine without the comma.
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016498#msg1016498
« Reply #4 on: November 19, 2012, 06:27:19 am »
No, because then it reads:  Gain airborne.  +2 attack and momentum.  Fall.  The second comma tells that it is a list.

But this grammatical digression is really left to you on how you wish to pursue it.  It's just a personal peeve.
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016499#msg1016499
« Reply #5 on: November 19, 2012, 06:29:50 am »
Quote from: Drake_XIV on November 19, 2012, 06:27:19 am
No, because then it reads:  Gain airborne.  +2 attack and momentum.  Fall.  The second comma tells that it is a list.

But this grammatical digression is really left to you on how you wish to pursue it.  It's just a personal peeve.
I meant without the comma after attack. In a list, the last comma is optional.
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016501#msg1016501
« Reply #6 on: November 19, 2012, 08:07:00 am »
When does the Fall effect take place?
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1016508#msg1016508
« Reply #7 on: November 19, 2012, 01:49:46 pm »
Quote from: Anarook on November 19, 2012, 08:07:00 am
When does the Fall effect take place?

After use of the ability.
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Re: Raising Charger | Flying Charger https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=44721.msg1020782#msg1020782
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2012, 04:14:44 am »
Bump for feedback & art.
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