Considering you're just starting out I think it's a pretty decent first attempt, and given the limited cards you likely have right now, fairly good. I think if I were you that I'd remove the fate egg, since it doesn't really fit the deck theme, and possibly the chaos seed and thunderstorm as well, although admittedly the thunderstorm will help your otyughs eat things. The one obvious improvement you can make is to add more quanta sources, as I think that you do not have enough air or life quanta generation. I'd do something like this:
-1 chaos seed
-1 fate egg
-1 thunderstorm
+3 life pendulum (maybe even a couple more than that, and make your deck up to ~35 cards)
Try that, and see how things go from there.