Psychic | Psychic

[Arum]

NAME: Psychic ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 5 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4 | 6 TEXT: Every 5 attacks, Psychic deals a telekinetic blow to an enemy creature, dealing DMG equal to half of Physic's ATK.	NAME: Psychic ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 6 TYPE: Creature ATK|HP: 4 | 7 TEXT: Every 4 attacks, Psychic deals a telekinetic blow to an enemy creature, dealing DMG equal to half of Physic's ATK.

ART: None IDEA: Arum NOTES: This is inspired by moomoose' Psion, so I decided or am deciding to make a new series of creatures based off that sort of thing. Also, telekinetic is treated as a spell, so anything that stops spells from being played, like Adenosine in Life Crucible, will stop the telekinetic passive. Also really viable with rage potion, dealing massive amounts of damage to enemy creatures. Note: Half rounds down. Unupped Psychic: 2 DMG, enemy creature is alive, still has 23 health. Use blessing. Psychic attacks. Psychic attacks. Rage potion. Psychic attacks. Psychic attacks. Psychic attacks and deals the telekinetic blow. Enemy creature now down to 17. That's pretty much the whole thing. Chaos seed with this = super fun . SERIES: Will be part of a "mindpowers" series.

[Arum]

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No replies after nearly three days?
I'm disappointed. Am I really just unappealing, stupid, ignorant, or an idiot, or is everyone just hating me? Either way, the lack of replies and feedback just has me annoyed.

[Annele]

It's very... complicated.

[Arum]

It's very... complicated.

((ATK* refer (update) value 1/2(redonevalue lower .5)) Length (5) Target*))

or something like that.

[furballdn]

Seems pretty UP. Right off the bat, 5|6 for either 4|6 or 4|7 isn't that good. Why would gaining 1hp gain a whole cost increase? At the very least make it still be 5 or make its attack higher. Secondly, the ability only activates every fifth time psychic attacks. How many 5 turns are there in a whole game? 1 perhaps, and 2 at maximum. Very few games go above 15 turns. Thirdly, the attack is really pointless. Without buffs, it just deals 2 damage to a random opponent creature. yay? Even with a blessing and rage pot you mentioned, that's only 6 damage to a random opponent creature every fifth turn for 5 turns + 5 + 3 + 3 . Why not just have a lightning that costs 2 and 1 card instead of relying on a huge, complicated, not really worth it combo?

[ddevans96]

Either way, the lack of replies and feedback just has me annoyed.

Happens to everyone. Get over it.

[OldTrees]

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No replies after nearly three days?

Complex mechanics tend to dissuade replies. (Complex is often mistaken for complicated. This is merely complex.)

Every 5 attacks, Psychic deals a telekinetic blow to an enemy creature, dealing DMG equal to half of Physic's ATK.

Both the Yellow and Orange sections are balance mechanics.
Why use the yellow?
Why use the orange?
Why use both?

The Green can be simplified to "attacks"

[Hyroen]

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No replies after nearly three days?
I'm disappointed. Am I really just unappealing, stupid, ignorant, or an idiot, or is everyone just hating me? Either way, the lack of replies and feedback just has me annoyed.

These things happen, it's just one of the ups and downs of being a Card Designer.

Aside, as requested, I'll help with what I can.

First of all, explain your interpretation of the interrelation between Entropy, Psychic and Card Effect. Cards that have a logical relation between these 3 components are the most effectively executed.

Second, is there a way to provide a Card Effect that is user friendly (easy to understand) while still being potent, balanced and maintaining the relations to and Psychics?

Lastly, Psychic ≠ Physic. I'm not sure if you wrote it that way to save space, but make sure to name the card correctly if you are referring to that card.

I believe that addressing these points will lead to an improved design.