Fusion | Improved Fusion

[lolicjj]

NAME: Fusion ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 2  TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT: Chemical Fusion: Each turn generate . Absorb  .	NAME: Improved Fusion ELEMENT: Entropy COST: 2 TYPE: Permanent ATK|HP: TEXT: Chemical Fusion: Each turn generate . Absorb  .

ART: http://www.britsattheirbest.com/ingenious/ii_19th_century_1800_1831.htm (http://www.britsattheirbest.com/ingenious/ii_19th_century_1800_1831.htm) (for the atomic) http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1001780 (http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1001780) (for the background) Combine it and decor a bit with Photoshop 7.0 and paint (for changing picture format especially the atom) IDEA: cjjkrenzbgt NOTES: I thought that combining a multiple quanta to gain some quanta from 'ourself' pool is not bad. I saw recently combining aether with entropy is quite good after all. This would help to make a quinted purple nymph deck, althought this card have negative effect. For the upped i make the cost 2 to make the usage easier, which only need one aether quanta to generate. Combining this card with momentum-ed purple nymph / dragon  / etc (It's up your choice!) now possible. SERIES:

Any comment and suggestion are TRULY needed. Thank you so much ^^,

*UPDATE REPORT*
Update 1: Change the skill of the upped card -> Completed. Check the upped card note below ^^,
Update 2: Change the skill of the unupped card -> Completed. Check the unupped card note below ^^, Thanks to Nepycros
Update 3: Heavy-Repair on the table -> Completed. It's now look better to see.
Update 4: Simplifying the word for each card (Didn't realize that random quanta can symbolize as ) -> DONE! Hooray for lotof editing I'm still waiting for lot of comment and suggestion ^^,
Update 5: ADDING POLL due to Zblader's comment for my card. Check it out! (lasts 12 hours too keep this card updates ) -> POLL CLOSED. The most vote = Gravity. Thanks for your vote!
Update 6: Mistake on spelling -> Completed. Thanks OldTrees ^^
 

[Nepycros]

Shorter wording: "Absorb 1 random quanta each turn, and generate 2 . Upkeep: "

Clever, ain't it?

[lolicjj]

Shorter wording: "Absorb 1 random quanta each turn, and generate 2 . Upkeep: "

Clever, ain't it?

*Chemical Fusion: Absorb 1 random quanta and  from your pool to gain 2    each turn. When the    quanta reach 0, destroy this card.*

[Nepycros]

Shorter wording: "Absorb 1 random quanta each turn, and generate 2 . Upkeep: "

Clever, ain't it?

Chemical Fusion: Absorb a random quanta and a [/color][/color] from your pool to gain 2 . When the quanta in your pool reach 0, destroy this card.

My wording encompasses all of that, and makes it shorter. What you have going for you is the same thing. If it has no , it's destroyed. It only takes one other quanta, so it's the same thing.

[lolicjj]

Shorter wording: "Absorb 1 random quanta each turn, and generate 2 . Upkeep: "

Clever, ain't it?

Chemical Fusion: Absorb a random quanta and a from your pool to gain 2 . When the quanta in your pool reach 0, destroy this card.

My wording encompasses all of that, and makes it shorter. What you have going for you is the same thing. If it has no , it's destroyed. It only takes one other quanta, so it's the same thing.

Got what are you talking about. Thanks a lot ^^, gotta change the unupped card soon.

EDIT : Changed. Thank you

[lolicjj]

*reserved*

[OldTrees]

Is the destruction of the upped card immediate or does it check only right before generating quanta?
If the latter then the text can be cleaned up to read:
"Each turn  is generated. Absorb  per turn."

Unupped could be simplified if you change the "Absorb  per turn" to "Absorb  per turn".

[Nepycros]

Is the destruction of the upped card immediate or does it check only right before generating quanta?
If the latter then the text can be cleaned up to read:
"Each turn  is generated. Absorb  per turn."

Unupped could be simplified if you change the "Absorb  per turn" to "Absorb  per turn".

^This.

[lolicjj]

Is the destruction of the upped card immediate or does it check only right before generating quanta?
If the latter then the text can be cleaned up to read:
"Each turn  is generated. Absorb  per turn."

Unupped could be simplified if you change the "Absorb  per turn" to "Absorb  per turn".

1. The destruction of the upped card was before generating quanta immediately. Thanks for asking ^^,
2. A more simplified word for upped was amazing. I'll change the card note for upped later.
3. For the unupped one i still with the  , because if absorbing  , it'll speedup the destruction. The reason of choosing  is to reduce the speed of the destruction of the card, while absorbing  are possible (around 8,3%). Thanks for asking.

EDIT: for number one.

[Jenkar]

Intertwining of the s and the o in the upgraded version.
I love it. (the card)

[Smurrf]

Intertwining of the s and the o in the upgraded version.
I love it. (the card)

That'd be juxtaposition.  Intertwining, they'd be linked together.
Art needs credit on the card as well.

[lolicjj]

ADDED POLLS ^^ Feel free to change your choice