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Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340686#msg340686
« on: May 26, 2011, 03:12:16 am »
NAME:
Ninja
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
2 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3 | 1
TEXT:
Enters cloaked for 2 turns.
:darkness : Smokebomb
Return Ninja to hand.
NAME:
Ninja
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
2 :air
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4 | 1
TEXT:
Enters cloaked for 2 turns.
1 : Smokebomb
Return Ninja to hand.
ART:
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IDEA:
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NOTES:
Straight forward. Considering decreasing cloaked time to 1 turn.

Didn't want to make Ninja :darkness Darkness due to Nightfall | Eclipse.

Not airborne.

Don't forget that Minor Phoenix has Immolation. ^_^


Feel free to help me out with the name of the creature and the name of the skill. I was pretty shocked that there was no formal Ninja idea. Yeah...

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Re: Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340689#msg340689
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2011, 03:22:22 am »
i understand why you didnt want to make it :darkness , but conceptually the ability and card element are reversed, which is slightly off-putting =/
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Re: Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340690#msg340690
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2011, 03:26:13 am »
It feels like a :time skill to me, called Retreat maybe?

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Re: Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340692#msg340692
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2011, 03:35:11 am »
I guess I should add that Ninja is one of the few :air Air creatures that is not airborne. ^_^

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I guess it's a matter of perspective or I just want to make you believe that.
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I think a :time skill would imply more that it's going back in time, whereas this skill is not that. The ninja swiftly throws a smokebomb down to conceal its location and ideally, retreat just when its cover is gone.
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Re: Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340725#msg340725
« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2011, 05:28:40 am »
Since Smokebomb requires both the Activation cost(AC) and the Casting cost(CC) to be paid to renew the temporary cloak, it seems like AC+CC should be a low value.
Smokebomb + Stealth 2 acts almost like Immaterial (the weakness to AoE is still important)
HP of 1 is convenient as a weakness and to make the Stealth'd creature (named Ninja) only visible after Pandemonium because it would die to other AoE

 I would suggest -1Atk, -1 CC.

Stealth 2
Smokebomb
AC+CC=low
AC= :darkness|1
CC=2 :underworld|1 :underworld
Atk=3|3-4
HP=1
 :underworld=/= :darkness (nightfall would allow creature to be seen without Pandemonium)
 :underworld= :aether :air or :time based on name and theme for returning to hand.
Ninja:  :underworld= :air ( :aether and  :time still would work but slightly less so)

Ninja could be Ranged and not be OP.
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Re: Ninja | Ninja https://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?topic=26798.msg340726#msg340726
« Reply #5 on: May 26, 2011, 05:32:42 am »
Will update to reflect suggested balancing.

Hope I did that right. ._.
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