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Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« on: March 30, 2011, 07:59:42 pm »
Existing Card Rework #2
To see the first one, Click Here (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php/topic,2672.0.html)
Talk about a blast from the past! This competition hasn't seen the light of day since the early days of the forum, and now you have a chance to participate!

We've all seen what you've had to say in The Buff/Nerf This Card sections, or maybe you had entirely different ideas for cards in the game, and now you get to show them off. In this competition, we are asking you to take a card that already exists in the game and changing it up. Maybe you never liked Otyugh's devour ability. Now you can change it so it spews forth stomach acid all over your opponents creatures damaging them!

The ideas are limitless and we want to see what you can come up with.


Rules & Requirements

1. Do not post your card rework anywhere else but in this thread. These cards will not be going into the Smithy, Crucible, or any other level of the Card Ideas and Art section. These are competition only cards.
2. Please use the template provided for you at the bottom of the Rules & Requirements section.
3. Please keep any discussion on entries or the competition itself on topic at all times. When commenting on a card, do not offer small unhelpful comments such as: "This card is really cool." "I don't like this card." "It was better before." "This card is a big improvement."
4. If you need help getting the image for the card, please ask me or one of the other Competition Organizers to help you.
5. Although not required, Planplan's Card Image Builder located Here (http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=pages;sa=8) or Here (http://helltgivre.free.fr/elements/card.html).
6. You may not modify the card's image or change the card's name. Any entry that has done so will not be accepted.
7. When changing the card, try to keep the theme of the element the card is in.

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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2011, 08:17:42 pm »
Three words: About darn time :)

Also ish at the Otyugh/stomach acid example.

Competition Entry Only
NAME:
Fractal
ELEMENT:
Aether
COST:
7 :aether
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Gain up to five copies of the target creature in your hand. Lose :aether :aether for each copy if there is quanta in your pool.
NAME:
Fractal
ELEMENT:
Aether
COST:
6 :aether
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Gain up to five copies of the target creature in your hand. Lose :aether :aether for each copy if there is quanta in your pool.

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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2011, 08:40:02 pm »

We are allowed to edit this before the deadline right?
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2011, 01:40:24 am »
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NAME:
Crusader
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
:light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
2|4
TEXT:
Smite Evil: gain +5|+5 if opponent's mark is Darkness or Death.
 :light :light :light Smite: deal 3 damage to target creature, and if it dies, transform it into a Photon instead, negating death effects.
NAME:
Crusader
ELEMENT:
Light
COST:
9 :light
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
3|6
TEXT:
Smite Disorder: Gain +5|+5 if opponent's mark is Darkness, Death, or Entropy.
 :light :light :light Smite: Deal 3 damage to target creature, and if it dies, transform it into a Photon instead, negating death effects.
NOTES: I coudln't find the card image anywhere... so there is no picture. due to the fact that both name and picture can't be changed, however, I can't see much problem.


I think this idea fits Crusader more, due to them being the knights of life, light and order. The Smite ability was to make it slightly better, even if it may have turned it OP...
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2011, 11:53:32 am »
Maybe you never liked Otyugh's devour ability. Now you can change it so it spews forth stomach acid all over your opponents creatures damaging them!
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2011, 01:42:48 pm »
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NAME:
Thunderstorm
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
4 :air
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Deals 1 damage to all enemy creatures for every 10 air quanta in your possession.
NAME:
Lightning Storm
ELEMENT:
Air
COST:
3 :air
TYPE:
Spell
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Deals 1 damage to all enemy creatures for every 10 air quanta in your possession.
NOTES: Well, it certainly would get some use if it got this change. It makes sense gameplay-wise because you can't crush your opponent with this. Yeah, you can potentially kill all of their creatures, but this doesn't lay a finger on them. You're not winning the game with this, unlike the bolts.

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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2011, 04:51:36 pm »
Ugh, I feel an urge to give ideas on how to fix their cards a little bit... I think the time i was checking the Card Ideas affected me a little too much. >_<
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2011, 05:31:24 pm »
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NAME:
Graboid
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4 :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
1|2
TEXT:
Graboid turns into Stone Dragon if it has over 10 HP.
:time : Stone form
Graboid gains +0 / +20.
NAME:
Elite Graboid
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
5 :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
1|2
TEXT:
Elite Graboid turns into Basalt Dragon if it has over 12 HP.
:time : Stone form
Graboid gains +0 / +20.
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2011, 07:58:09 pm »
A pretty simple rework.^^ (I'm trying to find the images :P)

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NAME:
Hematite Golem
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4 :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
4|4
TEXT:
Damage Reduction: 1
Each time Hematite Golem suffers for any damage, reduce it by 1.
NAME:
Steel Golem
ELEMENT:
Earth
COST:
4 :earth
TYPE:
Creature
ATK|HP:
5|5
TEXT:
Damage Reduction: 2
Each time Steel suffers for any damage, reduce it by 2.
NOTES: You cast a fireball with 6 :fire on a Steel Golem? It only suffers 1 damage. You cast a fireball with 14 :fire on a Steel Golem? It only suffers 4 damages. It reduces any damage by 1|2, even infection, fire shield, etc etc...

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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #9 on: March 31, 2011, 08:18:51 pm »
NOt sure why the OP links to the old version of the card generator.  The latest and far superior version is here (http://helltgivre.free.fr/elements/card_beta/).


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NAME:
Trident
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
3 :water
TYPE:
Permanent (Weapon)
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Weapon - 6 damage.  :earth :earth :earth - Destroy a number of pillars equal to your :water quanta divided by 10.
NAME:
Poseidon
ELEMENT:
Water
COST:
3 :water
TYPE:
Permanent (Weapon)
ATK|HP:
TEXT:
Weapon - 6 damage.  :earth :earth - Destroy a number of pillars equal to your :water quanta divided by 10.
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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #10 on: March 31, 2011, 08:21:04 pm »
NOt sure why the OP links to the old version of the card generator.  The latest and far superior version is here (http://helltgivre.free.fr/elements/card_beta/).
It actually links to both.

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Re: Competition: Existing Card Rework #2 (Semi-Permalink)
« Reply #11 on: March 31, 2011, 08:31:12 pm »
Also, everyone looking for images, try this: http://elementscommunity.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;area=forumprofile;

That's a link to the viewer's forum profile?
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